Oh I can't wait to see where you take this!  Great start!  

I wondered if anyone was going to write something about the Ojai thing. It's good inspiration. Not surprised you chose to go the A&R route with this character from all you've gushed to me about the behind the scenes in the music business. I think it fits Berkeley well. (Gonna guess you purposefully named her (somewhat) after the music school because of her lineage). Anyway, this is a good start. Can't wait to see where it leads!