Comments For Hold My Heart
mollyanna5 (Signed) on Sep 17, 2012 01:10 am (Chapter 18)
I just read the entire story so far, it would be awesome if you continued it :)



Mack (Anonymous) on Jun 09, 2012 12:14 pm (Chapter 18)
UPDATE PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAASSSEEEE!



Megan (Anonymous) on Jul 07, 2011 03:08 pm (Chapter 18)
hey...was just checking in to see if you were going to post an update anytime soon? I miss this story!!



browneyedgrl (Anonymous) on Jul 02, 2011 11:11 am (Chapter 18)
This story is so good! I hope there will be more updates.



Mack (Anonymous) on Jun 18, 2011 03:51 pm (Chapter 18)
Are you going to update again soon? I can't wait!!!

Author's Response: I'm sorry it's been a little over a month now. Life just seemed to get a little hectic and my momentum fizzled. (Plus both of my muses were messing with my heart in RL.) Yet, I'll try to get back to it soon. Thanks for asking and being patient. :)



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on May 17, 2011 04:21 pm (Chapter 18)
Oh my gosh, I loved this chapter sooo much! Ahhh! I can't believe that Matt and Everly almost went there! I'm glad they didn't go all the way though, I agree with Everly it is abit too soon. And how sweet was it that Everly went to go check on JC? He kissed her on the forehead, awww! Hmmm, Hopefully it will turn into something more!



Megan (Anonymous) on May 15, 2011 11:57 pm (Chapter 18)
I love this story!!!! It just gets better and better with every update =). Everly is so cute with Matt and I almost feel bad for Matt when Everly stopped their 'session.' Also, poor JC for having his house broken into...that actually happened late last year right? Also, glad that Everly can give JC some needed support. Can't wait for another update =).

Author's Response: It means a lot that you're loving this! Yes, in November his house supposedly got broken into twice and then this Februrary someone got into his car. I'm just sort of throwing all the incidences together as one big one for the sake of the story. Thanks for the review!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 15, 2011 08:52 pm (Chapter 18)
*thud* Im okay..lolz Right now, I also have the sudden urge to hug him and keep him safe..yes anything for you JC.. :) *hugs* Im getting that warm and fuzzy feeling again..HA! Ok from the middle, Matt was totally in the mood, and so was Everly, though she did a good job on putting a stop to it, saying that she wasnt ready for intimacy just yet. At least Matt understood that part..yeah Matt, hold your horses..lolz..Anyway, Im totally loving this story, really am..Great job and thanks for the update! Update soon.. ;) Looking forward to what happens next.. :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much for another great review! :)



Emily (Anonymous) on May 15, 2011 09:18 am (Chapter 18)
Yay! Always happy to see an update! Despite liking Matt, I was really hoping Ev would have a little something with JC at the end. C'mon and console him, Ev! Keep up the great writing, and I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Always nice to receive a comment from a new reviewer. Thank you so much and I'm glad you're enjoying it!





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