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Hold My Heart
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on May 12, 2011 02:20 pm (
Chapter 17)
That dinner with Matt and Everly was really cute! I can't believe Aimee was bold enough to send Everly those text messages while she was with Matt! I can't help it, I do agree with her though! Even though Matt and Everly are cute together, I'm still pulling for JC and Everly as endgame, because Megan is bitch and she doesn't deserve someone as good as JC, Everly does, and JC needs to realize that! They belong together!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 08, 2011 09:07 pm (
Chapter 17)
UGH! Aimee was totally ruining the moment that Matt and Everly were having. Seriously, I think they are having a really great relationship. Love the cooking she did for him, chicken picatta sounds good right now, lolz. Anywho, lets go back to the supermarket, JC's girlfriend Megan, sounds a bit..manipulative, hey if JC wants a cookie, let him have the cookie, I'll let him eat whatever he wants, cause he has a low metabolism(like me..lolz) and doesnt gain weight as much, now I know she's a "personal" trainer but still, *stomps foot on floor* And the problem with JC is that he can get easily lost with the girl charm, and he falls back. :P Above all, great job on this chapter..looking forward to the next one.. :) This is getting good..
Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on May 08, 2011 11:53 am (
Chapter 17)
Something about Megan really irks me but I can't put my finger on it. I love how steadily Matt's and Everly's relationship is progressing. Many times I've seen people jump into relationships and they don't seem realisitic but this one is good. Now, Aimee, I kinda want to kill for giving her second thoughts about Matt but it was great drama. Update again soon.
nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on May 08, 2011 04:18 am (
Chapter 17)
like where this is heading. matt and everly are so cute together. i hope he doesn't get his heart broken but i LOVE jc too. wouldn't know what to do if i was in everly's shoes!
Megan (Anonymous) on May 08, 2011 02:09 am (
Chapter 17)
Ohhh goodness this story just gets better and better with each update! Haha its weird that Everly just seems to run into JC everywhere. Is it just me or does Megan seem a a little controling and a little bit of a bitch? Hmmm...Matt and Everly are so freakin cute together, but Aimee does have a great point "you have feelings for two men and you know it. A title won't change that." Can't wait for another update =)
Author's Response: And I was afraid that this chapter was all over the place. haha. Glad to see that I'm not disappointing and that you are enjoying each chapter. To comment on JC and Everly bumping into each other... your characters sometimes need coincidences to carry out what you want them to. lol. I also wanted a way for Everly to come face to face with Megan unexpectedly.
