Comments For Hold My Heart
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Apr 28, 2011 05:57 pm (Chapter 14)
I'm really liking Everly and Matt together. When you first wrote that JC wanted to set them up, I gotta admit that I wasn't so sure, but now I love the two of them together. The only thing that would be better than Matt and Everly is JC and Everly! What I also like is Aimee! She is sooo awesome for checking for JC's size! She actually reminds me of one of my friends, she is very bold!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 27, 2011 08:03 pm (Chapter 14)

*giggles* Magnum?? Heck yeah! Way to go JC, *fans herself* Is it hot in here or is just me?? lolz Ok, let me start from the top, I think thats real cute that Everly and Matt slept together, without intimacy of course, just shared a couple of cute morning kisses, things are going good for them... :) And Everly's sister Aimee, is so crazy, but she's a fun-loving kinda crazy, I can tell that Aimee is gonna be the one getting the juicy gossips, ;) she should hang out with Nathaniel! :D Anywho, Im loving every chapter so far, thanks for the update..




babymomo79 (Anonymous) on Apr 27, 2011 05:27 pm (Chapter 14)
Ha ha...I can already tell having Aimee around is going to make things interesting.



Megan (Anonymous) on Apr 27, 2011 02:04 pm (Chapter 14)
Haha Everly's sister is funny getting all excited about Magnum size condoms! Cute chapter with Matt and Everly! Update soon...please =).

Author's Response: I'm trying to update as soon/fast as I can. I don't like it when too much time goes by. lol.



Mack (Anonymous) on Apr 27, 2011 07:50 am (Chapter 14)
Everyly and Matt are so cute together. And I love her sister as well, the whole condom scene had me busting a gut laughing. I saw one spacing mistaking that got me a bit confused on who was talking, but otherwise the chapter was amazing. Update soon.

Author's Response: I'm glad the condom scene had you laughing. Thanks for your review!





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