Comments For Hold My Heart
Megan (Anonymous) on Apr 25, 2011 11:37 pm (Chapter 13)
Cute chapter! Matthew and Everly are so cute together! And good for Everly for accepting that JC is happy with that girl. Also, 'Pinklicious' for Lil' Mama is totally perfect! And yes I would like to see a character photo page...would be nice to put a 'face' with the characters in this story =).
Author's Response: What I love is how you comment on Matt and Everly, while everyone else focuses on JC. It's nice to know that another male character doesn't disappoint. Thanks for your reviews and I'm still considering the character page. So maybe you'll see one soon.
Author's Response: What I love is how you comment on Matt and Everly, while everyone else focuses on JC. It's nice to know that another male character doesn't disappoint. Thanks for your reviews and I'm still considering the character page. So maybe you'll see one soon.
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Apr 25, 2011 09:54 pm (Chapter 13)
Wow, I can't believe that JC was late! Oh my gosh, I love Randy Jackson, and his lingo, and pinklicious totally sounds like Lil Mama! But most importantly, I wanna see how this all plays out. I think Matt is a great guy, and a great distraction for Everly, but at the same time there's JC, but JC's got a girl now! This is so crazy. I wonder if JC had the same feelings for Everly!? I mean c'mon, how can he not!!!
Author's Response: Yeah...this definitely is a doozy. I find myself becoming attached Matt and his role was suppose to be a minor one. So much for that. I feel bad that she won't get to pick both in the end, despite this being fiction. haha.
Author's Response: Yeah...this definitely is a doozy. I find myself becoming attached Matt and his role was suppose to be a minor one. So much for that. I feel bad that she won't get to pick both in the end, despite this being fiction. haha.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 25, 2011 07:53 pm (Chapter 13)
"Pinkalicious" Lolz Only Lil Mama would come out with those colorful outfits, totally suits her..and yes and I quote "JC is always late, but he's worth the wait" ;) I wonder whats gonna happen next, I hope the "mystery brunette" treats him right, tee hee..and looks like everything is going smoothly b/tween Everly and Matt, ooh his place?? :D Interesting..good job, looking forward to next chapter.. :)
Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on Apr 25, 2011 06:24 pm (Chapter 13)
I like that she's with Matthew but I really want to see how she (eventually) gets with JC. Get that myster girl out of the way. But I guess there wouldn't be a plot without their others, eh? Update soon!
Author's Response: Haha I'm not even entirely sure yet myself...there's so many scenarios swirling around in my head. Thanks for reading and hope you'll continue!
Author's Response: Haha I'm not even entirely sure yet myself...there's so many scenarios swirling around in my head. Thanks for reading and hope you'll continue!
