Comments For Lucky
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jan 17, 2011 09:51 pm (Chapter 3)
I sense some foreshadowing here. Drunk wedding in their future, perhaps?
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Oct 19, 2010 09:20 pm (Chapter 3)
Wow! Love this chapter! Enjoying the sunset with Justin can be kinda nice..yayy! Nice job! :)
musicmel (Signed) on Oct 14, 2010 10:08 am (Chapter 3)
Green and Gold eyes, that’s ME! I would be taking the random shots of him as well. You totally did give him to me :) My favorite line was when she was talking about him being natural, ready to be displayed in a heartbeat. I loved the way it complimented both of them at the same time. Great job! I can’t wait to read more.
azchickadee (Signed) on Oct 13, 2010 11:50 pm (Chapter 3)
He was genuinely expressive. He carried every emotion in a sack across his heart and resting on his right hip, at his disposal, ready to be displayed in a heartbeat.
LOVE that line!!
Also...where's the rest of the story? I need it. Right now. I'm waiting....
rosaleighwrites (Signed) on Oct 13, 2010 11:04 pm (Chapter 3)
I looooooooooove this story so far!! The chemistry between the two is amazing!! Keep up the fantastic work!! :)
megzor (Signed) on Oct 13, 2010 10:50 pm (Chapter 3)
i love this. youve made deliah a very likable character too. not one of those "i'm best friends with jt so i'm a bitch" characters.
