Comments For Something Like You
theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 04, 2016 10:49 am (Extinguished)

NO WAY! NO FREAKIN WAY! Wow the end of part one?? LOOKING FORWARD FOR PART TWO! Nope, no one gets over JC so easily... ;) But these lines here:

“I can see it on your face,” he pressed, stepping closer. I caught a whiff of his cologne. It slapped around my senses. He was too close. I took a step back. “Is it Lou? Is he doing something to make you uncomfortable?”

YES! Lou is so freakin CREEPY! *shudders* But glad that Mack and her dad are spending time together, even if he's not feeling that well, I had to do a refresher because I forgot a few stuff..but now I'm back on track! :D

So glad you UPDATED! LOL Looking forward for more, maybe Mack DOES need a break..away from everything. 



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jul 31, 2016 08:00 pm (Extinguished)
Mack's stubbornness is her downfall. Between her relationship with JC, and whats going on with Lou. Every time someon seems to get closer to the truth, she backs away. Her crippling fear is understandable, but I wish she would let the people that love her help her. And she's so not over JC. 


anonymous (Anonymous) on Jul 30, 2016 07:08 am (Extinguished)
Any sort of revenge against Lou I support but I can't wait to see his ass get thrown in jail. Can't wait for more!


Nerdily Ingenious (Signed) on Jul 28, 2016 01:34 am (Extinguished)

Despite her relationship with JC at the current moment, it would have been nice if she could have tried to engage him. Even if she didn't want to tell him about the source of her discomfort. But she has valid reasons for being angry, and I don't want to take away from that.

It's clear that JC cares about her enough, because he noticed something else was up. He did try and make amends. I do wonder whether their relationship can be fixed. It definitely changes the dynamic when and if they have to work together again.

Glad you returned, Mack! 



Author's Response:

Yeahhh, her being angry and being stubborn as hell isn't a good combination for her. Throw being rejected atop of that and she's not thinkingly clearly so all the things she should be doing is something that goes completley out the window. It takes her a long while to learn her lessons and she has a penchant for running around and torturing herself rather than going for the obvious and less troublesome solution.

JC cares about her a lot more than the haze of anger clouding her eyes will allow her to see. The question is how long she'll allow the haze to stay, or else she'll self-destruct in the process of allowing her pride to run her actions. Fixing their relationship will be a tough road they'll face, assuming they decide to take that path at the same time and how much free-will comes along with that decision.

Thanks so much! I'm glad to be back! Glad to see you updating as well! I won't keep you all waiting long for the next one this time.





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