ashley (Anonymous) on Nov 24, 2015 11:39 am (
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I love this story! I wasn't expecting the slap at all, I was expecting a kiss haha...And the way JC was looking at her when she was dancing with Justin....Can't wait to find out more about that! Update soon please =)
theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 25, 2015 08:22 pm (
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LOU?! WHY IN THE WORLD IS LOU THERE?! Especially next to Mack's father?? AHH! THE SUSPENSE!
Ok, love that Mack performed her heart out on stage, and so happy that her mom was there with her too! AWW! Oh and the thought of Chris doing makeup on Mack is hilarious to me, I wouldn't mind having Chris do my makeup..
And why was JC staring at Mack like that?? OMG is it JC's famous epic stare that makes girls go haywire??
Good update! Looking forward for more! :D
Nerdily Ingenious (Signed) on Oct 23, 2015 12:14 am (
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Okay, the dead obvious thing that's sticking out right now is why Bobbie being so nice to her. Is it because JC's isn't her friend anymore? That screams insecure and transparent, especially since JC hasn't really showed any type of romantic interest in Mack. At least not anything overt.
Another thing that sticks out is Justin. Justin's making his move now that she and JC aren't friends? Why is JC some kind of enigma for everyone where if he's out of the picture, everyone can do what they'd like. Is it because they all know the feelings between JC and Mack? Hmm.
I'm glad her father could make it, not liking that Lou was the one to escort him. Can't wait for another update!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 22, 2015 06:10 pm (
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Aww man, why did Lou have to show up! Another great update. Can't wait for more :)
Anonymous (Signed) on Oct 22, 2015 05:19 pm (
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Oh gosh, so much happened and you still have me on the edge of my seat! I can't wait to see what you do next! I'm beginning to wonder how you're going to top yourself. Please update again soon!
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Oct 21, 2015 10:08 pm (
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This was such an emotional chapter! From Mack being surprised by Charlotte and Mike, to her being worried about the future and her relationships with the guys and screwing things up, to her dedicating that song to her dad, and then him showing up followed by Lou. Such a whirlwind! I am anxiously waiting on pins and needles for that creep to be exposeed for what he is. And whenever that does happen, I know all hell is going to break loose. I can't wait to see the turn that this atory will take next.
