I like how Mack is finally starting to stick up for herself! JC and Justin are SO protective of her - I feel like one of their feelings will eventually change from platonic to romantic... once she's older of course lol! Just my opinion! :)
Also, I haven't come across many stories that mention Bobbie as much as this story does, and she's EXACTLY how I pictured her to be. Like, completely spot-on! I'm interested to find out who this Fiona chick is, and what she and Bobbie are up to. Poor JC!
Keep up the good writing girl!Author's Response:
It's about time she sticks up for herself, aint it? She likes making people happy but it was only a matter of time until she got annoyed of lying down like a rug, huh? Well, JC and Justin do have good reasons for being so protective of her, it's just that they don't see that they're being too protective. Hahaha, I'm glad I made Bobbie like she was in your head. I've based her off stories that I've heard about her so it's all in my imagination. I'm glad you're enjoying this story, the next chapter should be up soon!
Wow! Mack is totally being overworked here, but look at that..she's still going at this..makes me soo proud! *tear Yes..she can be stubborn at times, but she has the guys to back her up.. LOLZ! I laughed when JC sat on her though. that was funny(yes JC we love u 2) lolz & gotta love the fist fight moments when she said that Joey was her fave..
Pretty good job girl! Thanks for updating! :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying this story so much. Yeah, she's overworked, but she can handle it as well as she's organized, lilke a classic Virgo. JC's too funny aint he? Thanks for sticking with the story and the next chapter should be up soon.
Baby Big Ears had me rolling! The sarcasm is just - wow. She truly is fluent in that as a third language. I loved the chapter, and I loved the song choices.
I just have ONE teenie tiny bone to pick with you -- was it really necessary for Fatima to FORCE Mack to apologize? It was humiliating, I think. And, to me, it just put on display Mack once again accommodating those around her. I don't know. It rubbed me wrong. Sorry.
Author's Response: Good eye, and yes it was necessary to force her to apologize. The results will be shown in the next few chapters. Don't apologize, I like the way you think. I'm glad you liked the chapter and thanks for the review! The next one should be up soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Mack finally gets a break, eh? Thanks for the review!
