this was awesome. at first i felt bad for becca cause i could see why she would feel jealous or cheated from how things were from her perspective, and i wasn't really sure what i was about to read. it was a really wonderful and touching story though. it's amazing how things are not always what they seem. things can seem so perfect and appealing on the outside, but man...if only we knew. haha. i couldn't help but to love their little family myself. anyway, really great job. :o)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you liked it :)

Amazing job, please keep writhing

Ooohhh such a juicy start. From the summary alone I think this is a case where the sister is judging a book by its cover and we all know where that gets us

Author's Response: Yes, never a good idea. lol. Thanks for always reading my stuff!

something bad is going to happen and it's all her fault! you can't wish bad things on people, especially your little sister and her husband. great job tho, i can't wait to read the next part.

Author's Response: Seriously, she doesn't exactly win the sister of the year award haha. Thanks for reading!

Well, aren't we Little Miss Sunshine? Please update soon.

Author's Response: lol exactly. Thanks for reading!

You should totally be careful what you wish for. I love it already. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! :)