Reviews For Fatal
Teeny (Signed) on Apr 14, 2009 11:12 am (Fatal)
Oh yay! I wasn't expecting a happy ending after all that angst!  I kind of hate Justin for being a cheating man whore but people make mistakes and he seemed to see the error of his ways.  If only he hadn't done it in the first place, silly boy...loved it!

Author's Response: Ohhhh thanks so much for reading one of my stories and liking it! Eeeep! :-D. Yeah there was a lot of angst but I had to give him a happy ending. I just couldn't go through with things turning out horribly for him....I mean, it's Justin....hehehe.  But I totally agree with you, cheating is horrible and I don't condone it. Yay! Glad you liked. Thanks so much for letting me know. :)

a_nonymous (Signed) on Feb 15, 2008 04:14 pm (Fatal)
Glad this had a happy ending!

Author's Response: Yeah me too because I wasn't so sure at first how it should have ended. hehe. Thanks a lot for the feedback I appreciate it.

SexualCoco (Signed) on Feb 14, 2008 06:07 pm (Fatal)
Aww D, I love this song! You and my man J. Holiday (haha). I was scared for a minute because I thought Justin wasn't going to make it when he closed his eyes. But I'm glad he did. Great job girlie!

Author's Response: Ahhhh yes, J holiday is the shit no doubt. Yeah, I was going back and forth for the ending because well I mean, I was thinking of making it a fatal ending but then it's he's just soooooooo.....I couldn't do it. I had to give him that thread of hope there at the end. hehehe. So glad you liked it Bri and thanks so much for always letting me Know what you think. You know I appreciate it girl. :)

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