theusagirl (Anonymous) on Dec 02, 2011 10:52 am (Its Just Like Starting Over)

Barnes and Noble, love that place.. :)

I'm glad that she didn't take it too hard when Brian "let her go" she went straight to the bookstore..woot! :D

This was a pretty good story, and I think you wrote a sequel to this, so I'm gonna look into that. :P Great job, and thanks for all the updates. ;)

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Dec 02, 2011 10:44 am (Everybody Hurts)

Pssh really Brian really?? I kinda knew that Brian wasn't stick with her that long. Going on tour.. *scoff*

And JC you DO care about Amelia..aww.. :P This is good, *reads next chapter*

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Dec 02, 2011 10:31 am (You're Letting Me)

Wow that Erma lady sounds annoying..LOL But yay she's gone now and all her jelly cookies..She's trying to set Amelia with Will?? And haha JC wanted to know who was Will?

And great hiding spot, the bedroom..nice. ahem. I would let him hold me..oh yes. :) But she was saved by the phone. *ring ring*

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Dec 01, 2011 09:16 pm (Helpless When She Smiles)

Who's at the door? Go hide JC.

I like how Mia was like letting out a secret, her emotions out to JC..nice job. :D

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 30, 2011 08:47 pm (Heart To Heart)

You staring in my eyes?" He whispered and broke my trance.



LOL! How could you NOT stare at his eyes, he has nice eyes, nice...everything. I would get nervous too if I was locked in that trance with him..

I just love their little banters..this is really good. I'm liking every chapter. ;)

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 30, 2011 08:31 pm (Explain Thyself)
*GASP* *jawdrops on laptop keyboard, picks it back up* Wow oh wow..I really don't know what to say. Well, first off, JC wanted to take Amelia home, but he didn't want to let her leave, it was like argumentative, bickering. This is really good, don't worry Amelia, you won't sleep alone tonight.. *reads next chapter*

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 30, 2011 08:09 pm (Roll To Me)
Ok JC what happened to you? What was that "Walt Disney" you had at the pizza place? I mean you were fine having pizza with Amelia, but you snapped..hmm.. *reads next chapter*

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 29, 2011 08:07 pm (Wondering Why)

I laughed at these lines here:

"Nice, I could go for some pizza. Plus I have a warm car. Nice and cushy, no scary hobos around." LOL!

Ok, see I like how JC is like trying to play some games with her, and I like how she agrees to hang out with him for some pizza, despite the stuff she says about him.. :P

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 29, 2011 08:01 pm (Just Be Careful)

These lines here:

"He smiled that dangerous/delicious smile, but this time there was tons of smug behind it. It was cold and I felt all of it." That smile... :P

Now, who does JC think he is?? Telling Amelia about Brian?? *reads next chapter*

Author's Response: What can I say? I love the man's smile ;) thanks for reading!

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 24, 2011 09:21 pm (Out of My Mind)

You haven't lost it just need some "self discovering" Go find yourself dude.. :) Go take that nice walk on the beach or Malibu or something.

I decided to read this after my Thanksgiving dinner..LOL! Hope yours was good. :)

Author's Response:

Yeah or what JC thinks of it as a mindfuck. You know? He needs to just be honest with himself already and to her. Thanks so much for the review!

I appreciate you reading this today. Its a great day so far and YEAH I'm stuffed big time. Lots of Thanksgiving leftovers. LOL

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 22, 2011 08:24 pm (Feels Like Home)
*happy sigh* The way you described Brian in this chapter is so nice. I'm happy that she feels safe with him. :)

Author's Response: I have a soft spot for Brian, always have. In the story ever I felt safe with him. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much!

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 22, 2011 08:19 pm (Jealous Guy)

Yes JC you ARE missing something, well someone.

Man, love that Amelia found JC again and blew up in his face, he liked when she was getting angry at him. HA!

*reads next chapter*

Author's Response: I could see him really wrestling with himself on what to do with how he feels. Here, he just lets it go and runs with it. I wanted him to be a little more coaxing. LOL But yeah, she let him have it. AGAIN he spoiled it. Serves him right for doing what he did. Thanks!

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 22, 2011 07:47 pm (Falling For YOU?!)

So sad what happened to Amelia's mom. :(

And it was funny that she was getting the jitters whenever Brian was around. So nice that he invited her to dinner and a beach, only to find out that it was a beach party. ;)

Author's Response: Yeah I left a little vague on purpose. I knew Brian was going to ask about it but it wasn't the point the chapter. Its just a piece of her life that she's aware of. I had a guy take me out to beach and dinner at that same restaurant, it really was nice. There's tons of beach parties in Malibu. Its sort of well known in the LA area. Thanks!

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 22, 2011 07:25 pm (Party, huh? Sweet)

I am LOVING this, yes I am. Wow JC is a chick magnet..such a freak you! LOL These lines here " I can do whatever I want. It’s how I always did things in my life. Want, take, have, with a wink of course. Can’t stress that enough. I wanna attack him now..lolz

*reads next chapter*

Author's Response: HAHA, I wanna do more than attack the man. He acts like a pornstar and loves it and gives it away. If only he'd give it to us right? lol Thanks for reading, you're awesome!

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 22, 2011 07:16 pm (The Beginning of Something)

Thats right! You only pay attention to Brian, he kissed her, well..a quick kiss actually.

I laughed at all these lines here "I only pray to the gods I don't see that vapid man whore again. Ugh, my fist tightened just picturing his perverted ass strutting by as if he own everything in sight. Next time I see him its scrotum pounding. He won't fuck for months after I'm done with him.

But hell, when's the next time that will happen? He's what I call the random asshole. That basically means the asshole appears out of nowhere and at the most inconvenient times.

This is really good, wanna read the next chapter. ;)

Author's Response: Its fun teasing JC like this. He deserves it for being like he is. I think she's got a right to be a little pissed! :) Thanks again!

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