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Reviews For An Unexpected Love Affair
violet (Signed) on Dec 06, 2010 03:53 pm (Starting the New Year On a Good or Bad Note? - Part 1)
*looks around* *pokes under bushes* Th'hell is the rest of it??? Seriously, I hope you get around to finishing this. I've been reading it all day and could.not.stop. Gorgeous story. I love the drama and how *real* it feels and am so glad that this popped up in the "random story" box this morning. Please update!
Author's Response: OMG!!!! I KNOW!!! I feel so bad that this story has slipped through my fingers. Gah! I tell ya. I don't wanna give up on it, It's just the writer's block preventing me from completing what I have outlined. Grr. I hope I can get back into it one day. I'm so sorry, but I'm so happy you like what you read. :) I still consider it my baby. *sigh* I've invested so much into J and Berry that I can't give up on them.
Saucy (Signed) on Nov 20, 2009 07:39 pm (Starting the New Year On a Good or Bad Note? - Part 1)
Please add part 2!! I'm dying to keep reading this story.
Author's Response: oh my gosh, I know I'm so sorry. I need to get back into updating AULA. It started off as writer's block and then I ended up getting engrossed in other stories and before I knew it, how much time passed between updates. I have been revising it though and editing my outline, so hopefully sometime soon I'll be able to get back into it. I really want to finish this one. It's taken on a life of it's own and now I'm working to make sure everything falls into place and all the stories get told properly and finished. Thanks for commenting...it's def. a push. hehe.
MrsTimberlake18 (Signed) on May 14, 2009 07:14 am (Starting the New Year On a Good or Bad Note? - Part 1)
ugh u cant stop it there! lol. i wanna see what happens! please continue
Author's Response: lol aw I see you're enjoying Jusitn and Zara's crazy adventure. I'm happy people are still reading and enjoying because I know it's like so long I was just about ready to pull my hair out with this one. hehehe. I love them, they've grown on me but right now, I'm working on seeing their story to the end so no worries. I'm working on the next update. Thanks so much for reading and commenting! :)
alimera (Signed) on Apr 26, 2009 12:38 pm (Starting the New Year On a Good or Bad Note? - Part 1)
Whew, thank goodness she told him about the text! And don't worry, I don't think this is too long. Just don't take too long to update again!
Author's Response: Yeah, I wasn't about to let her do anything stupid. lol Zara's a smart girl. Thanks for commenting and still liking this one. I'm working on the next update so I hope to have it up soon. :)
mzmillion (Signed) on Apr 24, 2009 10:13 pm (Starting the New Year On a Good or Bad Note? - Part 1)
That damn Jeremy... he is getting worsome...lol.
Author's Response: OMG! I know! Don't worry, I'm working on getting him out of the picture once and for all! lol. Thanks for commenting. Appreicate it.
alimera (Signed) on Apr 18, 2009 02:19 pm (New York, New Twist on Life, New Troubles...)
Hmm, I hope the unmentioned text doesn't come back to bite Zara in the ass later...update again soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, she'll deal with it don't worry. I'm not going to keep you guys wondering for too long again. I have each chap outlined finally so I can see the end in sight...it's just how quick I can write everything up. lol. Thanks for commenting. :)
mzmillion (Signed) on Apr 14, 2009 06:56 pm (New York, New Twist on Life, New Troubles...)
Let me guess, ding dong Zara is going to go alone and not say anything... this story is getting weirder and weirder...
Author's Response: That would be the obvious thing huh? Zara's a smart girl. lol. well, I know there's all kinda crazy drama in this one like a soap opera, and not everyone likes that kinda stuff, So I understand if you think it's strange and that's cool, but, the whole Jeremy thing isn't going to last too long again. I sorta outlined each chap so...I'll see how it goes. But thanks anyway for letting me know what you think.
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 16, 2009 03:38 am (Holiday Bliss)
I hope that nothing happens when they're in New York. I love this, PMS
Author's Response: Well, I can't promise absolutely nothing will happen. That would make their trip boring right? :) lol. Thanks for commenting. I'll try to update again soon.
Sheila (Anonymous) on Feb 15, 2009 02:37 am (Holiday Bliss)
omg! thank you so much for updating again! this update was great. I liked the interaction with Justin and Jahzara. I felt bad for Christian but Justin and Jahzara are such a hot couple. but what is wrong with Justin? he has temper problems. hope we learn more about that soon. update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for liking this story and reading even though it's hella long. lol. :) And Justin, well, he does have some issues which should be cleared up before the story is over. Bit, by bit, i'm hoping to ease you all into all the layers that make up his character so you all can have better insight on why he is the way he is, just like I did with Zara. Thanks for commenting. I'll update soon.
rev0586 (Anonymous) on Feb 15, 2009 12:50 am (Holiday Bliss)
"You're so full of shit Justin. You're twisted and cryptic." He really is a messed up person. He doesn't show it much, but it's there. Now was a spitting example of how warped his mind is sometimes. I can't believe he did that.
Hmmm is this something that I should look for n the future?? Cuz I've seen bits of him and his "jelousy/anger" issues but just not full out... I'd really like 2 c if there is more to him then it seems speacilly w. Christian coming in2 the picture... Dont keep me Waiting grl!!
Author's Response: Oh you're very perceptive. I know it was just a little paragraph, but it definitely said a lot about the darker side of Justin's character which Zara is beginning to see herself. I know this story is more focused on what makes up Zara and how she and Justin deals through everything, but I have to agree with you that Justin isn't all good and does have his darker moments which you all will certainly see fully and soon too. There is more to him. New York is going to be another turning point for the both of them...no doubt. Glad you noticed that side of him. I didn't want it to be too in your faces yet, but I did want you all to see that he's not all good because really, nobody is in real life. Everyone has their flaws and I was going for that with their characters. Soon, you all should understand fully how he really ticks just like I did for you guys with Zara. He's still has a little mystery to him. lol Thanks for the feedback.
alimera (Signed) on Feb 14, 2009 01:19 pm (Holiday Bliss)
Oh no, when she asks if she should be worried that's not a good sign...update again soon!
Author's Response: I totally agree. lol. You all will get to see how Justin 'gets bad by his property'. lol Don't forget he has his little anger issues. Thanks so much for commenting and still reading. I'll try to update again soon. thanks.
classicbeauty (Signed) on Feb 04, 2009 09:15 pm (Relaxation in the Mountains)
murder? official investigation? wow this shit just got deep. and im lovin it!
Yay great chapter, cant wait to see how this next ones going to go down.
hope this help get you over your writers block.
Author's Response: Yup it just got deep. lol. they're about to have some experiences in New York. thanks so much for reading and sticking with them dani. Means a lot. And thanks for commenting. Hopefully the block is fully gone. I'm working on the next update.
alimera (Signed) on Feb 03, 2009 03:05 pm (Relaxation in the Mountains)
Oh man, they can't even get away from all their issues when they're on a small vacation! Ugh, can't wait for all their drama to end! Update again soon.
Author's Response: I know right? But the drama makes everything interesting. I can't wait for it to end too. hehehe thanks for the feedback. :)
Vikki (Signed) on Feb 02, 2009 11:30 am (Relaxation in the Mountains)
omg!omg!omg! ok... so I don't think I left you fb before... hmmm. I started on this late, I read a few chapters here and there to catch up but its been awhile so I went back a reread the last chapter to get into the JustinBerry-state of mind... and OMG I'll all came back to me how awesome this story is! LOL!
Loved the update too! And I have no plans on giving up on them so you better not either missy! :)
Author's Response: Oh hey Vikki, well thanks for leaving some feedback now. I appreciate it and thanks for reading and liking Ju and Berry. hehehe. I won't give up on them, even if updates aren't as speedy as I'd like.
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 02, 2009 10:54 am (Relaxation in the Mountains)
I'm so glad to see this updated. I hope they they can catch the crazy asses who are trying to make life hell for them. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Yeah, they're getting closer to clearing everything up. Their trip to New York will be a defining factor. It should clear Just about everything up. thanks for commenting. :)
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