Reviews For Porn Star Dancing
MochaB (Signed) on Sep 01, 2010 05:54 pm (Porn Star Dancing)
Good 'ol sexiness ma'am. Lol :o)

Author's Response: EEP thanks girl! I do love me some Timberlovin' hahaha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


ltaylor03 (Signed) on Aug 24, 2010 10:03 am (Porn Star Dancing)

Jesus Christ. That was HOT.

You write the most incredible smut. But I'm sure you get that a lot. You have the perfect way of telling it without it being boring and routine sounding. 

Ugh. SO good. 



Author's Response: Thank you! I always joke that it figures that the one thing I'm decent at isn't a bankable talent lol I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


Bobbilynn (Anonymous) on Aug 24, 2010 03:28 am (Cast)
I love the name Dallas - especially for a girl!  Loved the story, too!  Great job, as usual!

Author's Response: I like it too! I wanted something that was a little saucy but not trashy and my editor suggested Dallas and I LOVED it. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


musicmel (Signed) on Aug 23, 2010 08:10 am (Porn Star Dancing)
You seem to never disappoint. Only makes me want to change professions. Lol Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this one so I'm glad it turned out well! And yeah I'm thinking stripping might now be considered a valid career choice in my eyes hahaha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!


sChErZo (Signed) on Aug 22, 2010 02:48 pm (Porn Star Dancing)
shit, that was hot!!!! *fans self*

Author's Response: StripClub!J does things to me. I'll admit it hahah Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


mzmillion (Signed) on Aug 21, 2010 10:02 pm (Cast)
niiiiiceeee

Author's Response: Thanks! I had seriously the best time writing this story. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


camshazam (Signed) on Aug 21, 2010 04:02 pm (Porn Star Dancing)
holy crap! that was too hot and I've never in all my life been so envious of a stripper.  great characterizations of J's various states of arousal.  too good in fact!  ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! It does get kind of tricky during visuals to not let the descriptions get monotinous so its good to know I pulled it off. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


WriteMeALoveSong (Signed) on Aug 21, 2010 03:29 pm (Porn Star Dancing)
GUUUUH Stripper!J...er, Stripclub!J hahaha.  I love how this was kinda out of his comfort zone and then he was just like fuck it I want her lol.  I would also like to add a special *wave* for you and just prepare youself for next month bish :)

Author's Response: HAHAHA *waaaaaaaves* I think that was one of my favorite parts about writing this story is the fact that we don't picture Justin as the "type" to do the whole stripper thing. Gotta switch it up every once in awhile. And next month will be EPIC. Thanks for reading and reviewing!


azchickadee (Signed) on Aug 21, 2010 10:52 am (Cast)
HOLY CRAP THAT WAS HOT.  I'm...I don't know what else to say!  lol...

Author's Response: That's all you need to say! I'm glad you enjoyed it because it was seriously so much fun to write! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


SexualCoco (Signed) on Aug 21, 2010 12:57 am (Porn Star Dancing)
Whew...*fans myself*

Girl that was HOT. Makes me want to live out one of fantasies/dreams of being a stripper (esp. with piercings like hers...I know, I'm a hoe) lol. Great job, now I'm off to listen to this song that inspired you.

Author's Response: Dude if I wasn't terrified of the pain I'd so do it hahaha. The song is AWESOME!!! I've been listening to it nonstop for like two weeks lol I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


Keediluv (Signed) on Aug 21, 2010 12:47 am (Porn Star Dancing)
Utterly damn ridiculous lady!  Dallas is kinda mean at first, grinding all that into him.  You know he's an ass man...shame! I will say she more than made up for it by story's end.  It's too hot mama, excellent work!

Author's Response: Girl you KNOW if he was gonna get it with a stripper she'd have to have a ridiculous ass haha. Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!




Submit a Review



Random Story
Why We Said Good-Bye by Sassy Spacey (PG-13)

Josh wonders why he said good-bye to the love of his life.
Featured Review

MochaB said: eeeeek!!! ok let me say that when you first joined this community and i saw your name in new members i was like "no effing way is this the same miranda-desperate-thoughts!" then you posted HDYKTMP and i seriously...
 
Featured Author

katethegreat
Author of: Waking Up in Vegas, Wonderwall, Mad Season...
[click for more]

Interview @
Unwritten
Affiliates
Joined
Connections