Reviews For Fine Lines
meaghan (Anonymous) on Feb 12, 2009 07:59 pm (The Rain Chronicles)
i know its been forever since theres been an update but i love this series. please give us an update

SJane (Signed) on Jun 02, 2008 08:59 am (The Rain Chronicles)
Reading the first part of the series u really felt for sophie and in this part u get a good feel of justins part in the relationship. How u update soon I love it

brittpinkie (Signed) on Apr 09, 2008 06:54 am (The Torn Saga)

My GOD, heart was pounding all through this chapter!  The suspense!  I love this story, by the way.  Okay, enough of this...I HAVE to find out if he heard her or not! :)

what_where (Signed) on Jan 21, 2008 03:16 pm (The Rain Chronicles)
I really liked the Torn Saga so I'm glad you continued with the sequel.  One thing... Howie Day sings Collide but it's ok cause I still love the song lol. Please update soon.

Author's Response: lol!  I did know that... I dont know why I wrote Daniel Powter because its correct on my site.  Gah... *goes to fix*

kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jan 07, 2008 07:53 pm (The Torn Saga)
This was amazing. I loved it, Great Job!!

SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Dec 22, 2007 02:25 pm (The Torn Saga)

Vessy (Signed) on Dec 13, 2007 02:35 pm (The Torn Saga)
amazing work!

Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on Dec 13, 2007 03:03 am (The Torn Saga)
This is VERY good. I love the way you write. Very suspenseful. I can actually "see" the characters. I feel the thump thump of my heart. Please update soon. You rock!

Laura123 (Signed) on Dec 10, 2007 06:13 pm (The Torn Saga)
great story. update soon.

EllieBeans (Signed) on Dec 10, 2007 05:59 pm (The Torn Saga)
Love this story...hate that I'm left hanging.

a_nonymous (Signed) on Dec 10, 2007 01:50 pm (The Torn Saga)

sarah1988 (Signed) on Dec 10, 2007 11:00 am (The Torn Saga)
ahh...nooooo! come ON! that's so not nice, cliff hangers suck :( but it's so full of tension, AWESOME!

angel_from_africa (Signed) on Dec 10, 2007 02:33 am (The Torn Saga)
OMG!! he has to hear her!! Can't wait for more!! :)

JoJo (Anonymous) on Dec 09, 2007 09:26 pm (The Torn Saga)
You can't leave it like that!! I take it back...i don't feel bad for Jared! he just made her late!! you need to update soon please!

JoJo (Anonymous) on Dec 06, 2007 07:26 pm (The Torn Saga)
That was good!! She better get up and go get that man! i do feel bad for jared though! and justin's little speech *sigh* can't wait for the next update!

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Haha! This line made me laugh "Then why are you looking at me like my dog just peed on your furniture?" LMAO! Yay! Melissa is in the studio recording her 1st song, this is so nice, Im liking this.. :)...

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