Reviews For Fine Lines
meaghan (Anonymous) on Feb 12, 2009 07:59 pm (The Rain Chronicles)
i know its been forever since theres been an update but i love this series. please give us an update

SJane (Signed) on Jun 02, 2008 08:59 am (The Rain Chronicles)
Reading the first part of the series u really felt for sophie and in this part u get a good feel of justins part in the relationship. How u update soon I love it

brittpinkie (Signed) on Apr 09, 2008 06:54 am (The Torn Saga)

My GOD, heart was pounding all through this chapter!  The suspense!  I love this story, by the way.  Okay, enough of this...I HAVE to find out if he heard her or not! :)

what_where (Signed) on Jan 21, 2008 03:16 pm (The Rain Chronicles)
I really liked the Torn Saga so I'm glad you continued with the sequel.  One thing... Howie Day sings Collide but it's ok cause I still love the song lol. Please update soon.

Author's Response: lol!  I did know that... I dont know why I wrote Daniel Powter because its correct on my site.  Gah... *goes to fix*

kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jan 07, 2008 07:53 pm (The Torn Saga)
This was amazing. I loved it, Great Job!!

SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Dec 22, 2007 02:25 pm (The Torn Saga)

Vessy (Signed) on Dec 13, 2007 02:35 pm (The Torn Saga)
amazing work!

Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on Dec 13, 2007 03:03 am (The Torn Saga)
This is VERY good. I love the way you write. Very suspenseful. I can actually "see" the characters. I feel the thump thump of my heart. Please update soon. You rock!

Laura123 (Signed) on Dec 10, 2007 06:13 pm (The Torn Saga)
great story. update soon.

EllieBeans (Signed) on Dec 10, 2007 05:59 pm (The Torn Saga)
Love this story...hate that I'm left hanging.

a_nonymous (Signed) on Dec 10, 2007 01:50 pm (The Torn Saga)

sarah1988 (Signed) on Dec 10, 2007 11:00 am (The Torn Saga)
ahh...nooooo! come ON! that's so not nice, cliff hangers suck :( but it's so full of tension, AWESOME!

angel_from_africa (Signed) on Dec 10, 2007 02:33 am (The Torn Saga)
OMG!! he has to hear her!! Can't wait for more!! :)

JoJo (Anonymous) on Dec 09, 2007 09:26 pm (The Torn Saga)
You can't leave it like that!! I take it back...i don't feel bad for Jared! he just made her late!! you need to update soon please!

JoJo (Anonymous) on Dec 06, 2007 07:26 pm (The Torn Saga)
That was good!! She better get up and go get that man! i do feel bad for jared though! and justin's little speech *sigh* can't wait for the next update!

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