This was originally intended to be a short story, but someone sparked my creative side and I'm going to expand.
How can he save her when the thing that's breaking her down is in her mind?
so yeah its going really good. she really does need to find herself on her own otherwise if he ever did leave for good say they broke up or something she'd crash hard. anyway good story adding ti to me faves :)
very good. very touching. little short keep up the good work. cant wait to see where it goes.
aww. thats very emotional. poor girl. wanna give her a big hug.
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etc..omg that was really good. i need more like now lol. seriously tho it was very well written, felt as if i was really there. just when shes making progress the mother calls. how rude.
Author's Response: Yeah, Gia's mom has that affect on people :) I'm so happy you like it, thank you so much for the review. It means so much, really :)
another wonderful update! the picnic with frankie was major cool points for him. cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Yes, the picnic with Frankie came from my own desire to be treated like that :) I'm totally living through my characters, lol. Thanks for the feedback, it means a lot to me :)
omg you gotta get this updated lady lol. i loved it. this is probly one of my fave chaps you've written.
Life is hard. You gotta be harder.
aint gonna lie when i first read the paragraph i was like okay thats a little too twilight and i closed out of it then i was like nah ill give it another chance (specially since it wasnt a justin story, that alone is a good reason to read) and wow glad i did. its good so far. im off to read 2 :).
Author's Response: LOL, thanks for reading it and giving it a chance. I hope you enjoy the rest of it. Where did you hear about it?
okay so i got confused from the beginning of chapter 1 til now but i figured it out lol. another decent chapter. schweet.
pretty intense right there. i saw your link on the stillnsync message board and i clicked on the link and voila here i am :).
Author's Response: Yay!! I'm glad you're now a reader.
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