Me and my heart we got issues
Don't know if I should hate you or miss you
Damn I wish that I could resist you
Can't decide if I should slap you or kiss you
Issues - The Saturdays
I've been reading, but I've been so lazy about leaving reviews. Shame on me! Anyway, I just want you to know that I am still loving this story and anxious to see if Reese and Justin realize they love each other. You're a great writer, Hollie!
Author's Response: So long as you're reading and enjoying, reviews are just gravy :o). Thanks lovely x
You see, dear reader, I never said that this was a love story. I never said that this was anything because in the end it turned out to be nothing... a lie, a joke, a figment of my imagination, just another conquest for him, a mistake for me, as Charlotte calls it 'a lesson learned,' a missing vingette from He's Just Not That Into You, to put it simply a 'cat/mouse' thing where the cat always wins and the mouse always loses.
For my Secret Santa, SomethingBlue42.
You had nothing to worry about - I loved it! Haha she really put Trace in his place, didn't she? Poor guy lol. Oh, and another guy and another girl in the mix now, I have a feeling neither of them will like that idea too much. You also described drunk Char to a tee, and I loved it!
Author's Response: Awwww, really? Thanks! I'm glad it wasn't a total disaster! lol. I found that I was focusing so much on Gin's inner demons and kind of losing the feistiness that we've all come to love her for and Trace seemed like the perfect device to bring her spunk back, lol. Of course from that encounter will come something more than Gin just snapping at him but for now it was a fun little moment. & yeah Sophie & Wes are about to rock the boat! Btw I love that you loved drunken Char because it was really fun to write her that way! Thanks so much for reading and for reviewing, it means a lot to me!
At twenty-two years old, Justin Timberlake was voted in as the youngest CEO in Goldman Sachs Brokerage company history. Reaching billionaire status by the age of twenty four, he is considered untouchable by most, especially by his own family. Greed has taken over his mind, and his lifestyle, his most famous motto being ‘business first.’ When tragedy suddenly strikes, Justin is faced with the responsibility of caring for two people he never thought he would have to. Kids are easy though, right? Wrong. Realizing he needs help, he begins to seek it, but what he finds is more than what he bargained for.
It took me a while to finally get here, but here I am!
I love how you wrapped up every character in the story, there was no holes left at the end, no questions. I hope you do go back to the sequel you've told me about, because I'd really like to see where you go next with it!
Wow...just wow! Just amazing, the shorts in this series just keep getting better!
Author's Response: Thanks! These are so much fun to write. I'm glad you're enjoying reading them!
You are stuck. And you're not alone. You are stuck... with Them.
Definitely a short but sweet story. I love how you captured JC's frustration at having to share a bus with Lance and Joey, it probably wasn't sunshine being stuck on the tour buses like we want to think. I loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!
This is a sad story about what happens with you put complete control into the hand of the wrong people and about what love should really be about. There are some really distubing parts and I don't ever wish for this to really happen, it's just fiction and it's the hard times in life that make you appericate the great ones.
Oooooh...not my normal read but I'm definitely fascinated! I can't wait to read more!
That woman is so evil! Poor JC and Justin. :( Another great chapter, though!
Author's Response: Thank you, I did say it would be a sad story at least in the begining but I swear things are going to turn around eventually. Sadly I actually had a large chunck of the middle already written just trying to connect them. :)
I'd also rent all of them just to get them away from the hell they're in - give them a nice warm bed and a good meal. I'd rent them for as many nights as I could afford. If I was broke and had to choose - either JC or Lance. Lance because he's my favorite, and of course I wouldn't take advantage of him, I'd much rather stay up all night and have a wonderful conversation with him. I'd probably beg him to give me one kiss, just so I could say that I had gotten that in my life lol. I'd actually be more tempted to rent JC though - because he's sick, and he really needs someone to take care of him. That's such a hard choice though because they're ALL sick and need someone to take care of them!
I've been reading every chapter - I'm absolutely 100% hooked. Thanks for your quick updates, this is awesome!
Thanks, I am glad you like it. I know it can be 'dark' at times. I was worried that people wouldn't like it becuase it is a little odd and dark, but I love it. I re-read it a lot, if it is possible to be addicted to your own story then I am.
As for JC just to calrify what is wrong with him - as any one who has had too much to drink can atest it takes a toll on your stomach. Especially if you drink on an empty stomach. In throey all the guys would be suffering from this but JC is the only one who is admitting to having it.
She just gets more evil by the second. First the idea to sell their sperm to women, now what she did to Justin. I hope she gets hers in the end.
I can't wait until Isadora arrives to save the day!
How cute! I can't wait for the next update. This gave me dreams of spending a winter in FL...
Author's Response: Oh, a winter in Florida would be really good right now, especially since we have snow on the ground here!
Above all this bustle you hear...
In the rush of the Holiday Season, JC and Olivia remind each other what Christmas is really about.
You put me, little ol' mumbly-grumbly knee-deep-in-a-blizzard me, completely in the Christmas spirit. When JC started playing Silver Bells the first time, I got chills, seriously. I know why you were nervous, but you nailed it!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted it to be great for my Santee, glad everyone else is enjoying it as well. :D
Christmas, my child, is love in action. Every time we love, every time we give, it's Christmas.
--Dale Evans
AWWW! DaddyJC is always so great, I love him! I didn't expect the "surprise" at the end, my face looked like Cole's when he saw his new train set LOL! You did such a great job with this!
Author's Response: Awww...thank you so much - it was a surprise for everyone!
JC finds more than he barganed for when he took the job.
Happy Holidays, sonadora!
Amazing! JC in a Santa costume - how cute!
Author's Response: Thank you!
High school. Prom. One unlikely love story.
For SweetTeaPi16. Happy Secret Santa! I hope you enjoy!
I also do not miss high school lol. This was an amazing story, and you threw me for a loop with the sister twist there. I don't know how that escaped me! Great job with this.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm surprised people didn't catch the sister thing, but I suppose I was trickier than I thought!
Justin isn't amused by Shelby's interpretation of her duties as his assistant and Shelby is MORE than amused by Justin's unamusement.
For my Secret Santa, a_moments_grace! I hope you like it!
The word "assbutt" made me laugh uncontrollably. So did the story, I have tears rolling right now. And as funny as it was, it was amazing and hot too. If I leave laundry laying out, my other half just sits on it.
Oh well. This was amazing, I loved your female character. I got a kick that she went right back to giving him a hard time at the end. You did such a great job.
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