I really liked this. The visuals made it seem so real. Great job.
Set in New York City, Justin Timberlake and Amelia Domineck are the hottest couple in the Manhattan social scene, and their wedding is fast approaching Event of the Year status. Amelia, headstrong and domineering, is not just planning her wedding, she’s choreographing it and Justin seems to simply be along for the ride, as well as Amelia’s assistant Charlotte who after accepting the job wonders if slavery somehow became legal without her realizing it. A Lolita wedding planner, a flakey assistant, and one bridezilla converge together to bring Charlotte and Justin closer and Justin begins to wonder… is this really all that’s left for him? A ring and a promise of forever with Amelia, or does he dare to dream of something more?
This shit is so deep and I'm completely engrossed in the story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to weave more of an intricate storyline this time around and I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
I'm really loving this story more and more and it's because you really can't completely hate or love any of the characters if you sit back and think about it. Amelia is the way she is because it's hard for women to get respect in the business world. The fact that she works hard is something to respect but she's so far in it that it's easy to hate who she's become. And I really think only Justin could be the one to have an affect on her but he's too punk ass. Relationships are so investing that it's hard to give them up but to completely lose your backbone? All the shit that bitch has said about him...Charlotte should punch them both just to make me happy. Gosh Charlie...At this point, I still have a few more chapters before I'm caught up (which is kinda exciting yet sad at the same time) but I feel like there's nothing wrong with change except for the fact that she's completely lost who she is in these two people. She and Justin really need to be true to themselves and I think they'd feel so much better...Rofl look at me analyzing them like it's real. It's relatable though! Anyway, keep up the good work. I'm sure I'll be leaving at least one more review.
Author's Response: YES that is exactly what I was going for! Everyone has the potential to be a lovable character but they keep making crap decisions haha. I like your analysis of the characters! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
That corner bar shit was hilarious. It's something I would do. And it's nice to see a more sophistocated and intelligent side to Ginger. Great chapter even though it was pretty heartbreaking.
Author's Response: I LOVED the corner bar line haha. Its something so simple yet provides so much hilarity haha. And Ginger! I'm a sucker for characetrs that are kind of dumb yet extremely insightful when the time is right. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
An ex-lovers spat and Cornish hens on Christmas eve.
For my Secret Santa LTaylor03
I love this! Especially the trash talk after sex that's still sweet. Awesome.
Author's Response: Yeah I really love the idea of romance shifting into sparring and playfulness. Its one of my favorite things to write. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
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