Penname: DesperateThoughts [Contact] Real name: Miranda
Member Since: Jan 10, 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Just one of the "old head's" around these parts. Writing has been my passion ever since I was able to actually read and write.  While in college, I came across fanfiction, merely by accident.  I was browsing through a Nsync forum one day and came across a story that was posted there entitled "The Difference Between Night and Day." by Kris G.

I was hooked after that and haven't turned back since.

“The best thing about dreams is that fleeting moment, when you are between asleep and awake, when you don't know the difference between reality and fantasy, when for just that one moment you feel with your entire soul that the dream is reality, and it really happened.”
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A Treasure Worth Seeking by Shellie Rated: R [Comments - 3]
Summary: It's two years in the future and NSync is slowly falling apart.  JC finds himself having to make the hardest choices of his life and he's having to make them alone.  Then out of the blue two people appear that make him question himself and the answers he was certain he'd already known.  Are they the treasure he's been searching for or merely distractions that could cause him to make the wrong decisions and ruin the rest of his life?   How do you follow your heart when it's pulling you in two completely different directions?
Recommended by: Vikki
Recommender's comments: This is an oldie but a goodie. One of the first JC stories I ever fell in love with. Shellie was such an amazing author! :)
Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Completed: Yes
[Report This] Added: Oct 26, 2009
Reviewer: DesperateThoughts Signed
Date: Feb 05, 2010 Title: A Treasure Worth Seeking

I remember reading this story a long time ago and I just got done reading it again.  It's a classic.

The characters are very believable and seem very true to life.  The interaction with JC and Caroline is adorable!  And I'm an addict for a good sex scene, so I wasn't disappointed at all LOL.

It's definitely a must read for those who haven't read it yet.

10:45 every morning he strolls in, hot as hell, craving a Reese's cup and making her want him so bad her whole entire body aches.  He's a flirt.  And she knows that, but what she doesn't know is that he wants her just as bad.  They are the highlights of each other's day.  Will they ever finally give into each other?  Or will they keep torturing themselves, wasting away in retail hell?

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 4
Genres: Alternate Universe, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 19
Wordcount: 92150 - Hits: 89203
Complete?: Yes - Published: Aug 02, 2007 - Last Updated: Feb 11, 2008 -
Reviewer: DesperateThoughts Signed
Date: Feb 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Candyman

This is hilarious, erotic, and fun all rolled into one...Just like that dang Candyman.  Great writing!

The Pick Up by Mere (NC-17) [Comments - 4]
Justin, in a pick up truck with a water gun and a gold tooth and a very very lucky lady.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: None

Series: JTPC POTD Series
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5714 - Hits: 2364
Complete?: Yes - Published: Sep 21, 2007 - Last Updated: Sep 21, 2007 -
Reviewer: DesperateThoughts Signed
Date: Mar 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Pick Up

Where has this one been all my life? Fuckin' loved this to pieces.

The Hunter by Chamile (NC-17) [Comments - 1]

Once again, the hunter takes his kill...



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: General

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 4035 - Hits: 1716
Complete?: Yes - Published: Nov 28, 2007 - Last Updated: Nov 28, 2007 -
Reviewer: DesperateThoughts Signed
Date: Jan 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Visual

I thouroughly enjoyed that!  My favorite line was, "Sweetheart, your body already knows the answer you're fighting to find, you just need to let your mind agree. That way I can get started, and then later, you can go home."  

 That was too funny!  Awesome visual!

An argument leads to her trying to take his Ferrari... but he doesn't give up without a fight and neither does she.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2927 - Hits: 3794
Complete?: Yes - Published: Feb 09, 2008 - Last Updated: Feb 09, 2008 -
Reviewer: DesperateThoughts Signed
Date: Mar 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Keys to His Ferrari

Very Hot!  Loved it!

Author's Response: YAY thank you! I really love this visual. Something about doing him in a fancy sports car just guuuuh. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

You're away at college missing your boyfriend and counting down the days until you get to see him again.

But what happens when you see him sooner than planned?

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2237 - Hits: 2404
Complete?: Yes - Published: Apr 10, 2008 - Last Updated: Apr 10, 2008 -
Reviewer: DesperateThoughts Signed
Date: Mar 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awwww...that was so cute!  Loved it!

I got the remedy, it's you on me and me on you
And you on me and me on you and you on
her
Then her on me and her on you and y'all on me
Then me on y'all and y'all on me

Menage a trois

A night of drunken debauchery leads to sex...for three. 



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5075 - Hits: 6577
Complete?: Yes - Published: Apr 11, 2008 - Last Updated: Apr 11, 2008 -
Reviewer: DesperateThoughts Signed
Date: Mar 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bounce

This line right here -- You’ve done some things sexually and you’re certainly not a virgin but this…this is some porno shit right here.-- Dying laughing at work.  

Loved this!  As usual



Author's Response: HAHA YES I just love the honesty of the train of thought. Like she's not trying to act like she's all innocent but damn lol Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Your boyfriend's laziness leads to a blowout. Find out how he intends to make up for it.

*Features Frankie from Alpha Dog*

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Fantasy, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 3086 - Hits: 5609
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 21, 2008 - Last Updated: May 21, 2008 -
Reviewer: DesperateThoughts Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Favorite Line:  "because I’m about to get real ethnic in here."

LMAO!  I absolutely loved this!  Very Hot!  Great Story!

 

Blame by Ally (NC-17) [Comments - 11]

"This is what you asked for
lame, lame, lame
The guy is always gonna get the blame
You said you want me to stop
but you keep screaming yes"

 

 

 

 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 5
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: Bleeding Love
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 4787 - Hits: 5331
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jun 16, 2008 - Last Updated: Jun 17, 2008 -
Reviewer: DesperateThoughts Signed
Date: Jul 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

How did I miss this!? I absolutely loved this story. Great work!

When Justin has a few too many at a party he decides to make a rather expensive purchase...and you're along for the ride

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Fantasy, Humor

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5800 - Hits: 3200
Complete?: Yes - Published: Aug 08, 2008 - Last Updated: Aug 08, 2008 -
Reviewer: DesperateThoughts Signed
Date: Mar 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Little Red Corvette

lmfao!  I absolutely loved this!  Hilarity, my favorite song, my favorite man, and sex?  What more could a girl need?

Author's Response: YES. This was such a fun challenge! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Hi, my name is Sydney, and I'm addick-ted. hehehe....



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: Relax, It's Just Sex
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2655 - Hits: 2122
Complete?: Yes - Published: Apr 09, 2009 - Last Updated: Apr 09, 2009 -
Reviewer: DesperateThoughts Signed
Date: Feb 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Monday

LOL I love how she sounded like she was at a sucking d***s anonymous meeting:  "I’m Sydney, I’m 27, an attorney at one of the most prestigious law firms in Los Angeles, and I’m addicted to penis!"



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it...I meant for that to stick out, LOL.

Salsa by mzmillion (NC-17) [Comments - 27]
Tatiana needed to have some fun outside of her mudane life so when Justin meets her in a club and needs a salsa instructor, she jumps at the chance to be something extraordinary and experience the pleasure she always wanted. What happens when that pleasure gets her in trouble and Justin can't seem to let her go?

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 7571 - Hits: 13030
Complete?: No - Published: Apr 16, 2009 - Last Updated: Nov 12, 2009 -
Reviewer: DesperateThoughts Signed
Date: Mar 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Let's Dance

This story is very good.  And I like the way it's written.  It has an original plot line.  It's muy caliente. It's culturally mixed.  And did I mention that it's muy caliente?

You shouldn't be hung up too much on whether or not your writing sucks.  As writers, we all have moments when we don't think our stuff is good enough for someone to want to continue reading it.  We might get hung up reading a fellow author's stories and wish that ours could flow like theirs, or wish that we could have conveyed that same emotion like they were able to. But all that's a matter of writing style...And we all have our own unique styles...Which makes the diversity here so great.

Unfortunately, we are our own worst critics when it comes to our own writings and it takes being a "feedback whore" to give us that extra push we need to keep going sometimes. lol

But if you enjoy writing...Then just keep writing.  Feedback or not (although feedback is definitely my crack lol).  If at the end of the day just one person likes your work then you have achieved something. If you can make us see what your imagination sees...If you can make us feel what your characters are feeling...If you can trasnport us from the front of our computer screens into the middle of your story like we are actually there?  Then that's all you need to know that your writing is good enough to continue.

I will stop babbling LOL...That was my long drawn out way of basically telling you that you are a good writer and to not worry so much and continue to do what you love to do. =D



Author's Response: After the day I am having, you don't believe how much I needed that... thank you. Next chapter is for you....

Reviewer: DesperateThoughts Signed
Date: Mar 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Tango

Favorite Line: 
"I came so hard, I was grunting and whimpering and basically bitching up. I almost started crying and sucking my damn thumb it was so good."

Really enjoying this so far... I'm praying that you update soon!  

 

 



Author's Response: Damnit, your about to make me attempt to write something....lol. I love this story but I think my writing sucks...lol so I haven't wanted to update.

Nightswimming deserves a quiet night

The photograph on the dashboard, taken years ago,

Turned around backwards so the windshield shows

Every streetlight reveals the picture in reverse

Still, it’s so much clearer



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Romance

Series: The River Series
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1616 - Hits: 1576
Complete?: Yes - Published: Aug 29, 2009 - Last Updated: Aug 29, 2009 -
Reviewer: DesperateThoughts Signed
Date: Feb 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Nightswimming

That was so cute.  I loved it!  Great writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Justin Timberlake used to be the biggest icon in pop music, and an even bigger entrepreneur.  But a twist of fate took his life, his career, and his future, and smashed it into 100 million pieces.  What happens when Justin moves back to his childhood home to try and salvage what's left of his manhood?

 

The story inspiration: 

he stood up out of bed,

it was as high as he could get.

but the limit was the sky,

way back when he was a kid.

 

but now he's hooked on the casino

'cause it's always an open window

that keeps the wind in his sails

while everything in life just fails.

 

he used to be a swan

but now that bird is long gone

flown from a property 

with no equity

 

so he buys the sunday paper

he likes to read wedding announcements

is he the son of a doctor

well if so, i bet that choice pleased her father

its not the sanctity of vows,

nor the white picket fence house--

it's the inenvitable parting

the ending of the dream starting.

 

the medication he's on

keeps him moving along

but he's still afraid to sing

afraid that he will be seen

and look like a fool

like he did at thirty two.

when she finally told the truth:

"i found someone new"

 

and you may think it is pathetic

sadness must be genetic

but if someone shot you through your window

yeah you may live to feel the wind blow

but will you be able to stand up?

walk around and throw your hands up?

and if those bullets fly again

what the hell will you do then?

 

yeah, what the hell will you do then? 


-imaginary.baseball.league, "sara" 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 6020 - Hits: 7445
Complete?: No - Published: Sep 04, 2009 - Last Updated: Sep 05, 2009 -
Reviewer: DesperateThoughts Signed
Date: Feb 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Definitely excited about this one...Keep em' coming!

Author's Response: Ugh, I know.  I SO need to get back to this story.  It's my favorite!  Thank you for the love and the review!  Sorry for the uber delay!