Penname: Schnessa [Contact] Real name: Vanessa
Member Since: May 28, 2008
Membership status: Member
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I'm 24 years old. Living in Texas. I love Boston, Boston Red Sox, irish catholic boys with baggage. I don't know what else to put...hope my writing speaks for itself. lol I like jade roses and calla lillies. I like the color sage green. and I like a boy named Justin.
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Set in New York City, Justin Timberlake and Amelia Domineck are the hottest couple in the Manhattan social scene, and their wedding is fast approaching Event of the Year status. Amelia, headstrong and domineering, is not just planning her wedding, she’s choreographing it and Justin seems to simply be along for the ride, as well as Amelia’s assistant Charlotte who after accepting the job wonders if slavery somehow became legal without her realizing it. A Lolita wedding planner, a flakey assistant, and one bridezilla converge together to bring Charlotte and Justin closer and Justin begins to wonder… is this really all that’s left for him? A ring and a promise of forever with Amelia, or does he dare to dream of something more?



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 6
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 45
Wordcount: 246846 - Hits: 232254
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 12, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 30, 2011 -
Reviewer: Schnessa Signed
Date: Jul 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh Heather!!! I'm loving you with this update!! Finally Justin's being a man!! EEEPPP Justin and Charlotte together= greatness

Author's Response: Yessssss Justin grew a pair...at least for the afternoon hahaha. Glad you're liking the Charltin connection. Those two kids...there's something there I tell ya ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Schnessa Signed
Date: Aug 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh HEATHER!!! Great job...I know this was kind of hard for you to write but you did so good! I'm still waiting for Charltin as we affectionately call them but it was great to see Justin's feelings towards Amelia. It's sad that he is still searching for that girl he fell in love with but it shows how loyal and romantic and optimistic he can be. Love ya BISH! lol

Author's Response: GUH YAAAAAAAAAAAY thanks for the love! Girl EVERYONE seems to be waiting for Charltin hahaha I wonder why...*snigger* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Schnessa Signed
Date: Aug 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OMG Heather....we need to have a talk.

Okay love love love this line

“Okay Charlotte you’re in charge,” Amelia says airily and Justin looks up and narrows his eyes before sighing, seemingly letting it go and returning to his cereal. “Bye.”

Like Justin is some child or better yet a dog that Charlotte's watching after! lol You are so good!

And the line of questioning...sounds like something Justin would do just because he can. Although if I was Charlotte I would probably be more pissed about losing my job. Simply because she does work for Amelia and not him. If it was him things could be worked around and laughed about but with Amelia as your boss it's not that easy. Anyways I'm rambling now....but I loved this update.



Author's Response: You know I seriously love it when you guys get all the undertones! This review made my day! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Schnessa Signed
Date: Aug 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 pt I

Oh Heather, I'm going to have to do two reviews since I have so much to say about each part! lol I'm sure you'll love it though! lol

Part One:

1. Zuit Suit-I just imagined Justin making a joke about wanting to get married in a Zuit Suit and it was always a dream of his and Amelia...well not getting it. So she brings it up to Charlotte (in all seriousness...as is Amelia's way)

2. How cute is Charlotte's dad? But I have a feeling maybe Charlotte is embarrassed a bit about her dad's occupation compared to say...Amelia's and Justin's.

3. Leo just got me laughing my bum off. And Charlie giggles and Justin's stomach flutters? He would have kissed her if he wasn't engaged? Ahh...that my dear, is you writing torture! lol

4. It kind of made me sad reading this as well though too just because Justin misses being Justin. Does that make sense? I just wish he would do something that he loved, I mean besides Golf and playing the piano...I mean really something that he loved just because he wanted too regardless of what Amelia said. But he's so pussy whipped it's not funny.

 

Off to read and review part two. By the way, I do love the update! MUAH! 



Author's Response: Okay first of all let me say that BOTH your reviews made my friggin day!!! And you're totally right about Amelia and the zuit suit hahahaha. Justin's sarcasm is lost on her. I dunno if Charlotte is so much embarrassed by what her dad does as opposed to embarrassed by the reactions that Justin and Amelia (mainly Amelia) would have to it. Does that make sense...hahaha probably not. Seriously, Leo was one of my favorite parts to write hahaha He reminds me of Christian Siriano from Project Runway...lol And what you said totally makes sense. Justin misses who he was and who he and Amelia were as a couple before she went all prim and proper. More on that in later chapters... Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Schnessa Signed
Date: Aug 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 pt II

Okay, the second part of my review.

Part Two:

1. The more and more Justin's thoughts are revealed...I kind of hate Amelia more and more. I mean they're so different and he points out everything he doesn't like about her. What kind of relationship is he stuck in? And why?

2. Justin on a diet? That boy would fade away! lol I hate Amelia! lol but seriously when Justin asked what Charlotte hated about working for Amelia...I wanted her to say 'seeing the way she treats you'...but it's Charlotte and she wouldn't.

3. And then his reaction to her getting the wrong thing on her salad...priceless. I'm sure he was relieved and grateful beyond belief....sometimes I think he needs to remind himself that "normal laid back" girls still exist...outside of his Amelia induced cage.

4. I'm glad that Charlotte confided in Justin about just not liking her job and quitting because of that. Maybe it'll snap something in Justin's head to get back to doing what he loved instead of settling.

5. I'm almost done....I swear! lol How sneaky, yet cute, is Justin talking to Charlotte's dad on the phone? That my dear was superb!

I love love love this story Heather! And I love you for writing it! Love ya Bish!



Author's Response: YAY more review...lol I really enjoy getting into Justin's head. Seeing both his and Charlotte's reactions was the main reason I decided to do this in third person which isn't the easiest POV for me to write for some odd reason but I guess that's good as well, helping me be well rounded and what not. Justin's diet is of course less about his weight and more about control. She's trying to make him eat healthy or something, that crazy bitch lol The salad thing was actually one of the very first ideas I had for this story hahahaha. I mean if you think about it he's kind of been trained to think that if women don't get what they want they freak out. It was like an instinctual reaction and then when it broke the cycle he was just dumbfounded lol. Can I just say that I LOVE that you got the parallel between Charlotte and Justin on the job thing *gives you cookies* And Justin talking to Charlotte's dad was great mostly because he and Justin are kind of alike. Goofy yet endearing...lol I'm really glad you're liking the story and I'm LOVING your reviews!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing...again..lol

Reviewer: Schnessa Signed
Date: Oct 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12 pt 2

OMG OMG OMG OMG Heather!!! I haven't reviewed in soooo long but I just got caught up on all the updates I missed and DAMN.....I feel Charltin starting to form...it's like in the air! lol *says in singsong voice* And Mama Lynn likes Charlotte more than Amelia! lol And Ginger....omg....I don't know whether to like her sometimes or just smack her! She's kind of cute in that annoying reminds me of my second cousin redneck kind of way! lol sorry my southern side came out a bit there....and FOURWHEELING!! are you serious? I think I've died and gone to heaven. And Justin...ugh...Justin is lying to himself like a dog lies on a rug....seriously Trace needs to kick his ass or secretly make it so that him and Charlotte hook up! Okay I'm writing a novel so I'll stop but I'm so happy! lol Luv ya Bish!

Author's Response: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY Thanks for taking the time to catch up! I'm glad you're liking it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Schnessa Signed
Date: Feb 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 18 pt 4

So I've been meaning to leave you a review and for some reason I haven't! I know, I know...shame on me. But I still love you Heather even if you do leave me hanging sometimes! lol but I just have to say the cupcake thing....so adorable! Did your little RA assignment inspire that??? because it was so worth it if it did! Thanks all I have to say because I think I've said enough on Facebook! lol

Author's Response: YAY Vanessa!!! Thanks for reviewing girl! The cupcake idea actually came before the RA thing. I've had the entire story planned out in my head since before I started (which is the way I do it with all my stories becasue I'm anal lol) so that's been in th deck for awhile. Thanks for reading and reviewing girl!

Reviewer: Schnessa Signed
Date: Nov 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I haven't left you a review in a long time! What the hell is wrong with me! haha You know you're my favorite bish! lol 

Anyways onto my review, I fucking hate Justin! I don't care that Amelia's a bitch or whatever, I'm used to that by now. So she had a rough childhood and her mother wasn't there, cry me a freaking river. Who cares about her?

I know she's an important part of the story but I just don't have it in me to feel sorry for her.

So, onto the hating Justin part... how can he not see how Charlie makes him feel? How can he just ignore that? It's almost like it's okay for Amelia to use him so he uses Charlie.

Don't get me wrong I'm glad they finally hooked up but it's a major sign when you can't live without someone so much that you actually experience pain in your heart and chest at the realization that they might not always be there. He needs to wake the fuck up and either decide that he's going to endure his self imposed hell with Amelia or let Charlie go.

As for Charlie, I really think she should just move on. She's always going to love Justin but is it really worth it? Sticking around for someone who doesn't even have the balls to admit that ya'll are indeed in a fucking relationship?  

I guess I would just love to see her pull away from him a bit. Put some distance between her and him just to see how he reacts. Just to see if it wakes him up a bit.

Okay so I done ranting and raving like a lunatic but it was a wonderful update it's just sometimes I want *makes a choking motion* the both of them. 



Author's Response: YAY good to hear from ya girl! I love the general frustration goin on haha. I know its killing you guys but trust me it's killing me getting these kids all messed up on each other lol Thanks for coming in and reading and reviewing!!!

"You've been alone, you've been afraid, I've been a fool in so many ways. But I could change my life, if you thought you might try to love me..."

A two part story about Justin Timberlake and his identical twin brother James.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 5
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, General, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 17
Wordcount: 83212 - Hits: 43566
Complete?: No - Published: Jun 02, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 13, 2010 -
Reviewer: Schnessa Signed
Date: Jun 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Katie and Justin. I love them together but I see trouble with James...uh oh...I can hardly wait Mere. God I love your stories.

Summer McKenzie is a prostitute on the streets of LA just trying to make ends meet. Then she got a regular customer with some money to burn, Justin Timberlake. Unfortunately during one of their excursions, the cameras catch them leaving the hotel together. Suddenly Summer is offered the job of a lifetime to play his girlfriend on tour for six months. It’s just the two of them and Stretches Of Highway

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 12389 - Hits: 8172
Complete?: No - Published: Jun 09, 2008 - Last Updated: Dec 15, 2011 -
Reviewer: Schnessa Signed
Date: Jun 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so good. Please update soon.

When Selah Bernstine decides that college isn't for her, her mother sends her to the one person that can talk some "sense" into her, her sister Ava--who has just scored her dream job as a dancer on Justin Timberlake's FutureSex/LoveShow Tour. Filled with confusing and conflicting feelings about what she truly wants, as well as a broken heart, Selah learns about herself and how to make her desires a reality through the last person she'd ever expect to, all while making mistakes along the way. At the same time, Justin learns about more about himself and wonders: Is what is right in front of him what he has wanted all along?


Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 62091 - Hits: 58448
Complete?: No - Published: Jun 11, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 20, 2009 -
Reviewer: Schnessa Signed
Date: Jun 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm SO ready to read more of this! I need an update soon or I just might die. Yeah I'm being dramatic but you know what I mean girl!

Author's Response: Haha! But there\'s so much more to come so I can\'t have you die just yet! Don\'t worry I\'m going to update soon so make sure you stay alive for it ok? Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Schnessa Signed
Date: Jun 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What the hell!?! This is not good for my heart. I really want these two to met...ugh....I hate the girlfriend too!!!! lol Okay I'm officially hooked!

Author's Response: Haha, I\'m sorry! Just so that your poor heart can calm itself, these two will be meeting very soon; so no worries! And I\'m glad that you\'re hooked and it\'s only just begun. ; ) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Schnessa Signed
Date: Aug 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

What!!! What!!! I haven't reviewed this story in awhile but trust me I've been reading it! I was waiting for this....Nick who? lol YES!!! GUH!

Author's Response: Haha @ \"Nick who?\" Well I appreciate you reading so much and I\'m glad that you enjoyed it, so thank you!

Reviewer: Schnessa Signed
Date: Jan 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

BRI!!! So I was just going to sit down real quick and read through this and then rush off to the library to get an earlier start on some classwork but you've hooked me again and now I'm leaving a review! lol This was by far the bestest update that I have been looking forward too! They are so amazing together....Nick who? lol

Author's Response: Awww, thanks girlie I appreciate that SO MUCH. Thank you for sticking with me and this story (even with my slow ass updates, lol). And we\'ll see if she\'ll be saying Nick who, stay tuned!

Girls and guys can be friends, right?  Well Jaelyn surely hopes so...especially since Justin basically saved her life...well sort of.  She has everything a girl could hope for, a great relationship with a loving boyfriend, friends who stand by her side through everything, and a guy who she can't keep her mind off of...just platonic friends right?



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 9106 - Hits: 11658
Complete?: No - Published: Jun 20, 2008 - Last Updated: Dec 29, 2008 -
Reviewer: Schnessa Signed
Date: Jun 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Can I just say I love Frat Justin. And the TWSS omg I love the Office this def. going to be one of my favorite stories!