Comments For Right in Front of Me
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jul 02, 2008 01:11 am (Chapter 8)
WoW. Bri. That was incredibly HOT! OMG! LoL. I can't wait to see where this goes. Justin jus needs to end it with Jessica ... and be with Selah. He know's it and she's knows it. Although ... hurting Nick will not be a good thing :( Anyway, awesome job as usual gurlie! I can't wait to see what else you have in store :) ttyl -Traci
Author's Response: Traci!!! These two definitely have chemistry, but both belong to someone else so them just hooking up isn't going very easy. Selah is definitely hurting Nick by falling and not putting a stop to Justin's advances, but let's just say he won't be hurting for long. ; ) I'm so glad that you enjoyed it girlie and thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Traci!!! These two definitely have chemistry, but both belong to someone else so them just hooking up isn't going very easy. Selah is definitely hurting Nick by falling and not putting a stop to Justin's advances, but let's just say he won't be hurting for long. ; ) I'm so glad that you enjoyed it girlie and thanks for reading and reviewing!
SJane (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 11:42 pm (Chapter 8)
my oh my are those two getting into it or what. That was majorly hot and there was barley any touching at all i can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Indeed they are, but Selah has a important decision to make and hopefully she'll make the right one for her. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Indeed they are, but Selah has a important decision to make and hopefully she'll make the right one for her. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
MissM69 (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 10:49 pm (Chapter 8)
Author's Response: Haha, well there's a reaction I was hoping for. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading and reviewing!
OMFG!!! 8O *faints*
Please oh please update soon :D
Author's Response: Haha, well there's a reaction I was hoping for. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading and reviewing!
LuLu (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 10:45 pm (Chapter 8)
Ok nothing really happen yet that was pretty damn steamy too. Justin is seriously sexy in this story.
I get the feeling that Selah is about to start the avoidance game and I don't think Justin's going to like playing.
This is getting so juicy. More please. I'm hooked!
Author's Response: Justin is too damn sexy, period. But I had to amp it up in this story since he's trying to get underneath Selah's skin. She may try to avoid and ignore him all she wants, but what woman in their right might would turn down his sexy ass? I guess we'll have to wait for her decision. And if you thought this was juicy, it's only going to get juicier. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
I get the feeling that Selah is about to start the avoidance game and I don't think Justin's going to like playing.
This is getting so juicy. More please. I'm hooked!
Author's Response: Justin is too damn sexy, period. But I had to amp it up in this story since he's trying to get underneath Selah's skin. She may try to avoid and ignore him all she wants, but what woman in their right might would turn down his sexy ass? I guess we'll have to wait for her decision. And if you thought this was juicy, it's only going to get juicier. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
dfort (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 08:44 pm (Chapter 1)
Author's Response: OMG, everyone is dying after reading this chapter; this can't be good (haha). Besides, you can't die just yet because there's plenty of more juiciness to come. And girrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrl, I wish I could make his dick hard in a whole variety of ways, but that's just me. ; ) Glad you liked it girlie and thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
*panting, sighing, breathing heavy*
jesus woman, are you TRYING to kill me over here? really, he just had to go and grab her crotch talking all cocky and confident. UGH
i wish I could make his dick hard in the club, if that's the kind of response i'd get from him. *drools* realllly?!?!
ok, so i'm gonna need an update here soon. yup, that'd be great, thanks! lo
Author's Response: OMG, everyone is dying after reading this chapter; this can't be good (haha). Besides, you can't die just yet because there's plenty of more juiciness to come. And girrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrl, I wish I could make his dick hard in a whole variety of ways, but that's just me. ; ) Glad you liked it girlie and thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Shybeauty (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 08:24 pm (Chapter 8)
oh my god.. I seriously would just die ♥ awesome update
Author's Response: Haha, if he touched me like that I would die too. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Haha, if he touched me like that I would die too. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 06:55 pm (Chapter 8)
"Honestly I was ready for him move my panties to the side and dickmatize me in the VIP lounge..." *slaps the taste out of Selah's mouth* “Apparently my dick was.” *licks* "“When I can see and feel how wet she gets every time that I’m around,” he says as he quickly cups my center from the outside of my jeans. “But she doesn’t have to worry, her secret is safe with me.”" *dies* I feel bad for Nick. :( But La has to pick the guy who's right for her, the one she likes the most and not the one who just likes her the most. Now, this one she knows she wants, is it Nick or Justin? Hmmmmm. And how about Mr.Timberlake not go around cupping any chick's goodies that aren't his girlfriend's? Whore. Please update soon.
Author's Response: *Dies of laughter* OMG, you are a mess. Like I am seriously dying right now. Selah is definitely playing with fire right now, but since she doesn't want to get completely burned she has a decision to make. Hopefully she'll make the right decision for her and won't regret it later. And I don't want to give TOO much away, but you won't have to worry about Nick for too long. ; ) Girl, I look forward to your reviews because they crack me the hell up so thank you for reading and taking time to leave one.
Author's Response: *Dies of laughter* OMG, you are a mess. Like I am seriously dying right now. Selah is definitely playing with fire right now, but since she doesn't want to get completely burned she has a decision to make. Hopefully she'll make the right decision for her and won't regret it later. And I don't want to give TOO much away, but you won't have to worry about Nick for too long. ; ) Girl, I look forward to your reviews because they crack me the hell up so thank you for reading and taking time to leave one.
Gigi (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 06:22 pm (Chapter 8)
Ugh I'm dead. You just killed, me are you happy now.
Author's Response: LMAO, well since I've been accused of murder, no I'm not happy (haha). But I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: LMAO, well since I've been accused of murder, no I'm not happy (haha). But I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for reading and reviewing!
sarah1988 (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 05:39 pm (Chapter 8)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that, it means a lot since this is my first story. And if you think that was sexy...it's just the beginning, TRUST me. *teehee* Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
damn that was pretty sexy :D
well....CONTINUE!!!!! you're a good writer!
can't wait to read the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that, it means a lot since this is my first story. And if you think that was sexy...it's just the beginning, TRUST me. *teehee* Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Nana26 (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 05:30 pm (Chapter 1)
Bri you own me woman, I'll give you Nick you keep this updated. This is soooooo hot, I love their interaction and Selah is my girl lol.
Author's Response: You damn right I own you woman...and that man you're trying to pass off as your own (haha). I'm glad you liked it girlie and thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: You damn right I own you woman...and that man you're trying to pass off as your own (haha). I'm glad you liked it girlie and thanks for reading and reviewing!
kkhbtb (Signed) on Jun 30, 2008 01:36 pm (Chapter 7)
Author's Response: Haha, hey I gotta leave you hanging so that I can come with even more craziness! I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I appreciate you reading and reviewing.
I freakin' love you and this story... Why you have to leave me hanging like that though??? HAHA! I love this...
Author's Response: Haha, hey I gotta leave you hanging so that I can come with even more craziness! I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I appreciate you reading and reviewing.
d_simplicity (Signed) on Jun 26, 2008 05:10 pm (Chapter 7)
Author's Response: LMAO. D, I *heart* you and your reviews girl. You know I had to put some J. Holiday in there because that's my shit (haha) and it set the mood right and whatnot. I'm glad you enjoyed it and yes, Selah and Justin have definitely made a connection whether they wanted to or not. Unfortunately, that DOES kind of suck for Nick and Jessica who have no idea what's going on, but don't count them out just yet because there's going to be plenty more where that came from. Thanks again for reading and reviewing girlie, I appreciate it!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh BRIIIIIIIIIIIIII OMFGAAAAAAAAHHH!!! BED!!! J HOLIDAY AND BED....ugh I just died of a pleasure overload.....that is the shit! Woop! I love you for doing that I swear hahahaha. That was soooo gooddamn hot and just...*tires to breath properly.* lol. It was sexy and sensual and just wow! They had some serious deep soulful or spiritual connection or something!
*Sigh* Ok, I think I'm good now. HAHAHA. This update was the best so far girl, I loved every bit of it. I could picture that shit too...amazing visual. hehe. Yeah, so it's safe to say that Mr. Lovestoned is becoming just that...lol. He's so into 'La. I kind of feel bad for Nick. He's a little hottie himself. hehehe. Anyway Can't wait to see how all of this is going to unfold with Justin, La, Ava, Nick and Jessica! Woop! Drama! lol. Love it, update soon. :D
Author's Response: LMAO. D, I *heart* you and your reviews girl. You know I had to put some J. Holiday in there because that's my shit (haha) and it set the mood right and whatnot. I'm glad you enjoyed it and yes, Selah and Justin have definitely made a connection whether they wanted to or not. Unfortunately, that DOES kind of suck for Nick and Jessica who have no idea what's going on, but don't count them out just yet because there's going to be plenty more where that came from. Thanks again for reading and reviewing girlie, I appreciate it!
a_nonymous (Signed) on Jun 26, 2008 03:52 pm (Chapter 7)
Yay! More, please!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you're liking it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you're liking it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
MochaB (Signed) on Jun 26, 2008 01:28 pm (Chapter 7)
ohmyfreakinggoshheckyes!! that was the hottest dance EVER. girl seriously...that was sexy. my body heat just rose way too high and i definitely don't mind. and great song choice. haha. things reeeally just got kicked into high gear and i'm loving it. justin is already bringing her confidence back everytime they speak. she gets all feisty and flirty and it's awesome. haha. jessica is still in the picture though, and i don't want ava to find out about this or nick. i think it should just stay between them because it was so private and there was some kind of connection made. i know that jess is still his gf, but i don't want selah and justin to distance themselves. i don't want them to backtrack. they don't have to go forward immediately (obviously), but i just don't want them to get weird on each othere. eh. i guess i have to wait and see what happens next. please update soon! awesome job on this one. :o)
Author's Response: Firstly, you know you are so right about Justin giving her a little bit of confidence back everytime that they speak or interact with each other and I never thought of it that way, so thanks for pointing that out to me. Secondly, yeah I had to find someway for these two to release the tension that they had between them (without them taking their clothes off), so I decided on dancing and I just made it as sexy as possible *teehee*. Not only do YOU not want Ava or Nick or even Jessica to find out, but neither do the two of them so we'll see how well they can keep this under wraps without being awkward toward each other or giving something away. And trust me, after that chapter there is no going back for Selah and Justin. I love your reviews and thank you so much for taking the time to read and write one. ; )
Author's Response: Firstly, you know you are so right about Justin giving her a little bit of confidence back everytime that they speak or interact with each other and I never thought of it that way, so thanks for pointing that out to me. Secondly, yeah I had to find someway for these two to release the tension that they had between them (without them taking their clothes off), so I decided on dancing and I just made it as sexy as possible *teehee*. Not only do YOU not want Ava or Nick or even Jessica to find out, but neither do the two of them so we'll see how well they can keep this under wraps without being awkward toward each other or giving something away. And trust me, after that chapter there is no going back for Selah and Justin. I love your reviews and thank you so much for taking the time to read and write one. ; )
DeterminedNot2Fall (Anonymous) on Jun 26, 2008 12:56 pm (Chapter 1)
Lord have mercy...Praise you Father! LMAO Justin is whoooo....ummm yesh! LMAO Get it girl, shoo damned if we can get it in real life!
Author's Response: LMAO! Well I'm glad that you liked this chapter enough to be praising God (haha). Ooooh, and I don't think I could handle all of that if I got it in real life either. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
Author's Response: LMAO! Well I'm glad that you liked this chapter enough to be praising God (haha). Ooooh, and I don't think I could handle all of that if I got it in real life either. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
