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justinaham (Signed) on Feb 28, 2008 04:37 pm (Chapter 13)
Damn I can only imagine how angry shes gonna be when she finds out why he feels so guilty.



MissM69 (Signed) on Feb 28, 2008 12:17 pm (Chapter 13)
Hot *fans herself*



LaLa (Signed) on Feb 27, 2008 04:17 pm (Chapter 12b)
Can't wait for another update



DaniD (Signed) on Feb 27, 2008 01:16 pm (Chapter 12b)

Alright..Justin is being weak. I know there are a lot of obstacles between Justin and Bryne, more than Justin even knows..but he knows that Bryne feels the connection between them too. He just whimped out. Anything worth having takes hard work and sacrifice. Justin is spoiled and used to getting what he wants on a whim. He fell right back into old patterns. I would have had a lot less problem with an interlude with his actual girlfriend Cam. If he wants to even get the climate right for ANY kind of future with Bryne..he needs to stop seeing Belinda.

Despite my frustration..I totally get this chapter and why it was necessary. I guess things are not going to progress well between Justin and Bryne like I hoped. *SIGH*

Glad to see you back..though you have been so good with your updates, I can hardly begrudge you taking a break here and there. Can't wait for more!

Dani




MochaB (Signed) on Feb 22, 2008 12:58 am (Chapter 12)
juuuustiiiiiin!!! :oD haha. that was great! he is so gone. i love it. :o) she is too she just keeps fighting it, but i love how he keeps surprising her with his behavior and what he says. i'm happy they didn't have sex, and i really hope they don't (although it will be hot haha) until they get to know each other better. More importantly until she tells him about Miranda and he gives his other girls the boot. I think he's not going to be happy about her and Miranda, so i think that will bring a new set of drama.  update soon please!



LaLa (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 10:48 pm (Chapter 12)
More More More! it sounds like things are getting interesting.



justinaham (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 07:23 pm (Chapter 12)
Itsa sexy time soon??? lol



DaniD (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 06:35 pm (Chapter 12)

*squealing like a little girl here* Yipee! I thought he was going to take her somewhere to screw..but this was so much better for the story! He is showing her a side of him that he only shows his Mother..That's a sure sign he's falling in love.

Well..Bryne told him the truth. She's not involved with a man. Uh hunh...somehow I think he's still going to be a bit upset. Hope he still takes Miranda for "all she's got" for Bryne.
Can't wait for more.. Thank you for these quick updates..This story is just under my skin!

Dani




MissM69 (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 06:12 pm (Chapter 12)
another great update can't wait for the next :D



d_simplicity (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 06:12 pm (Chapter 12)
His secret place he would only take his mother....wow, just wow Justin. He's surprising me man. He's really falling in truth. I can't wait to find out his reaction when he learns about Miranda. I just feel bad because hearts are going to get broken but amazing update. more soon.



watchoutforthecar (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 05:36 pm (Chapter 12)
Great update!



amai84 (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 12:00 pm (Chapter 11 b)
I've been reading this story for the past few days and I've finally caught up.  I love it!



MochaB (Signed) on Feb 20, 2008 11:26 pm (Chapter 11 b)
ok...that was the hottest thing ever and it wasn't even sex! seriously! i don't even want to think about what you will write when they actually do do the deed because it will happen...hopefully soon. haha. I would like her to break it off with Miranda though, and if he actually wants her like he's said he does, he knows he should break it off with Cam and Belinda. But I don't know...all i know is that that was amazing. haha! i love this story. keep it coming please! :o)



MissM69 (Signed) on Feb 20, 2008 10:52 pm (Chapter 11 b)
0_0 *faints*



Gigi (Signed) on Feb 20, 2008 09:30 pm (Chapter 11 b)
OMG! Wow he is good!





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