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LaLa (Signed) on Apr 09, 2008 07:58 pm (Chapter 18)
aww, things just had to be messy, but if they weren't this story wouldn't be as great as it is. Can't wait to read more.



sandy (Signed) on Apr 09, 2008 07:51 pm (Chapter 1)
many girls are on the pill for non-birth control reasons, just to control their periods and lesson the sypmtoms, so I don't think it was something that needed to be addressed in the story because she was a lesbian. Just my thoughts. But great update!! OMG. What is she doing staying in a dead relationship? She needs to be with Justin and if Miranda really loved her, she would want her to be happy even if that meant it wasn't with her.



Gigi (Signed) on Apr 09, 2008 06:31 pm (Chapter 18)
Ok this thought occured to me in the last chapter since Justin is the first man she ever been with is she still on the pill?



JoJo (Anonymous) on Apr 09, 2008 05:29 pm (Chapter 18)
FINALLY!! at least i think finally! i really hope she said it and i can't wait to see where it goes from here! great update!!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Apr 09, 2008 04:55 pm (Chapter 18)
That does not solve their problem though...it only stalls it. Is she going to break up with Miranda? I mean it's clear that she should since she came to Justin. Hot chapter though...can't wait for more. Update soon.



MissM69 (Signed) on Apr 09, 2008 04:42 pm (Chapter 18)
fantastic update great to see them together again can't wait for the next chapter :)



Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on Apr 09, 2008 05:37 am (Chapter 17)

Nooooooooooooooo. . .

Please. Update. Soon. Lol.




LaLa (Signed) on Apr 08, 2008 12:27 am (Chapter 17)
No words...update soon, please



JoJo (Anonymous) on Apr 08, 2008 12:17 am (Chapter 17)
that was very emotional!! OMG...i've been waiting for this update...can't wait for the next one! hope it's very soon!



justinaham (Signed) on Apr 07, 2008 11:09 pm (Chapter 17)

WHAT. A .BITCH.  LMAO




Marissa (Signed) on Apr 07, 2008 10:43 pm (Chapter 17)
This story is so ridiculously good, I'm like, addicted to it! Great job!!!



DaniD (Signed) on Apr 07, 2008 10:40 pm (Chapter 17)

Oh my..That didn't go well at all..I knew it was coming though.

Justin feels completely misled..but I can't help but wonder is he more upset because she is a lesbian..(actually I'd say she's Bisexual now) or because she misled him about having a significant other?

It's time for Bryne to open up and tell him how she actually fell in love with him..not that she was experimenting! She's going to stay with Miranda? She's not in love with Miranda anymore..so..bring on the pain and misery.

So happy to see an update~!

 




hillie121 (Signed) on Apr 07, 2008 10:18 pm (Chapter 17)

this was a really good chapter. i feel bad for justin

 




d_simplicity (Signed) on Apr 07, 2008 10:10 pm (Chapter 17)

Wha? 0_'0 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO....!!! AHHH fix this...fix this now! *bangs keyboard* no! :'-(. Aww man, I knew Justin was gonna get his heart broken. poor thing, now he doesn't seem so bad. Bryne needs to make up her mind. She can't stay with Miranda if she has Justin on the brain and in her heart? Why is she being like that? She's in denial & that's no excuse.

She and Justin are switching roles now...grrrr...You know, this is kinda wierd, and I don't know if you thought about it but I just have this thought. I'm thinking, Justin is experiencing his own case of karma with how he had those women like Belinda. I'm just saying I could be wrong. Anyway great update girl and can't wait for more. You know I love this story way to much now. hehehe.




sandy (Signed) on Apr 07, 2008 09:50 pm (Chapter 1)
NOO. She wants to be with Justin. Make it better please!!!





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