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EllieBeans (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 09:05 pm (Chapter 9b)
Oh my gosh! Totally loving this story so far and I know it may be totally awful of me, but I need him to say yes and for them to hook up like now.



Gigi (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 08:21 pm (Chapter 9b)
Ok woe, just wow!



mozie (Anonymous) on Feb 16, 2008 07:44 pm (Chapter 1)
awesome more please



MissM69 (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 06:39 pm (Chapter 9b)

very evil of you to leave us hanging like for shame ;)

can't wait for the next update :D




DaniD (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 06:36 pm (Chapter 9b)

Girl...You are delving into some deep stuff here. The subject of right or wrong of homosexuality?? Gotta say, Brave story and I love that you are doing it.

Bryne is a woman who is discovering more to her sexuality, but in reverse to what I am used to hearing about. Brilliant idea!

Dani




watchoutforthecar (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 05:53 pm (Chapter 9b)
And you stop there?



LaLa (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 05:16 pm (Chapter 9b)
Yes, Yes, Yes he wants her! Please Please update I'm lovin' this story.



(Anonymous) on Feb 16, 2008 05:09 pm (Chapter 9b)
How could you leave us hanging like that! I'm going to kill you lol. It's amazing how complex your characters are. You're doing a great job so far!



calinewgirl (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 04:58 pm (Chapter 9b)

Wow!

I'm one of those horrible fiction readers who just loves to read but hates to review and never usually bothers to - I'm sure I'm not the only one sadly - but seriously, this has got to be one of the best fanfics I've ever read and I've been reading since I was 16 ... I'm 25 now lol.

In all those years and in all those stories, this is the first time I've read a fanfic with a lesbian spin and I must say, it's ingenious. Absolutely fantastic, so keep up the great work. Oh and I LOVE the speedy updates. I hope they continue. ~ N




DaniD (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 02:56 am (Chapter 9)

Justin was busted again! lol

Was it me or did he act guilty when he saw Bryne. If he did feel guilty then it's funny because he hasn't shown any guilt by cheating on Cameron and she's his official girlfriend!

You are on a roll and I love it!

Dani




Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 01:30 am (Chapter 9)
I LOVE this story. Update, Update, ... please! LOl.



DaniD (Signed) on Feb 14, 2008 08:56 pm (Chapter 7b)

ooo...Guilt is a nasty feeling to deal with.  You're really on a roll..I hope that the chapters keep coming! :D

Dani




LaLa (Signed) on Feb 14, 2008 08:07 pm (Chapter 7b)
*sits and waits patiently for next chapter*



Gigi (Signed) on Feb 14, 2008 07:42 pm (Chapter 7)
Yeah what Justinaham said!!!



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Feb 14, 2008 07:22 pm (Chapter 7b)
that was interesting...I hope she doesnt break Miranda's heart when she finally falls for Justin...I like Miranda.





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