Comments For Strictly Business
MochaB (Signed) on Jul 07, 2008 11:21 pm (Chapter 21)
i don't think i've ever reviewed this story, but i must let you know how much i absolutely love it. it's kept me pulled in since i started reading it and it continues to do so with each update. this one was definitely no different. my gosh...wow. i can't wait to see what happens next. update soon please. :o)



atina23 (Signed) on Jul 02, 2008 04:39 pm (Chapter 21)
OMG This just got very complicated.  Really interesting twist in the story.  Does this girl even know what love is? Loves Miranda and Justin but is still following JC. Maybe she doen't love either and needs to work stuf out before she even considers what JC feels for her.



DaniD (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 06:39 pm (Chapter 21)

Oh Lord we officially have a mess...not that it wasn't messy before. If JC sleeps with her, while she's this confused and drunk...then he's a huge asshole!

I know the way she slept with Justin behind her girlfriend and bestfriends back..was shady. I still feel bad for her! She belongs with Justin! So that's who I'm rooting for :D

Thanks for this latest update!




Amber (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 06:20 pm (Chapter 21)

I love this story...

And if Bryne does anything more with JC I am so through with her...lol Harsh, but oh well. My impression of Bryne..oh, I'm kissing JC, am I making things more complicated? UH, hell yeah you are. That's an asinine question to even ask. DUH you're creating more of a mess. You haven't even fixed the two messes you're already in. Plus the media is hounding you over Justin. If they catch wind that you're with JC, the shit is going to hit the roof. I know she's not a ho, but that's the picture that's being painted on the outside. Bryne...get your shit together before you lose the one thing you know in your heart that you want.

Ok..I'm better now. lol Great story!




MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 06:15 pm (Chapter 21)
Please, Jesus, don't let her have sex with JC. God, no. Please update soon.



sarah1988 (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 03:32 pm (Chapter 21)

i don't like JC here...i mean he KNOWS about justin's feelings (he has to know he knows justin like forever) plus he's taking advantage of bryne's misery, which he 100% knows about. sooo...what the hell does he want?

and what is she thinking?!?! no no, she's gonna

destroy the friendship of justin and JC. 

not good, not good at all... oi oi oi

i love the way you write and bring another chapter pretty soon please.

thanks for continuing this. =)  






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