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DaniD (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 03:29 pm (Chapter 14)

Oh yeah that's a good wow. lol

So hot it left me speechless, and you know I'm a long winded reviewer.

I can't imagine what going to happen between them now that they've made love. What about their significant others? Belinda? OMG..*fanning myself* It's alot to take in.. :0

Dani




LaLa (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 03:17 pm (Chapter 14)
*Jaw drops* More please. I have a feeling things are gonna get difficult.



ashmama (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 02:52 pm (Chapter 14)

Wow.

 

.................can....can..someone tell me the number for 911?




calinewgirl (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 02:49 pm (Chapter 14)

Whoa Nelly!!!! ::fans herself::

No but seriously ... holy shit!




justinaham (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 01:44 pm (Chapter 14)
Damn....finally, that was HOT. I can't wait for the morning after.



Amber (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 01:36 pm (Chapter 14)

Holy...that was the most intense love scene. Had me sitting on pins and needles! lol

I am in love with Bryne & Justin. lol But really. I wonder what happened between her and Miranda to have her coming over there not even a hour after she first got home that night. I need to know!

I'm almost relieved that it finally happened for them, but at the same time, it's one of those...the shit has just gotten started and there's a long way to go things. There's Belinda to deal with and Cameron needs to be ditched which isn't really a problem. The real kink is going to be with Belinda.

That won't be easy, but at the same time, I feel like Belinda has known all a long that he didn't love her, and hadn't ever felt that way. Justin was never hers to begin with, but that doesn't make it feel any less shitty that he's in love with one of your friends who was supposed to be a lesbian. But after knowing how Bryne grew up and what happened to her, you start to understand all that, why she didn't want to have anything to do with men. It's understandable, but I could so see Belinda using that and lashing out to try and sabatago and make them hurt the way she's going to be hurting. I think Belinda has loved him and had been able to hide the fact from him until now when she's been getting all clingly and overbearing.

Wow...I cannot wait for more!




MissM69 (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 01:25 pm (Chapter 14)
WOW!! 0_0



Marissa (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 01:14 pm (Chapter 14)
Damn, that was intense. Great job!



DaniD (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 12:53 pm (Chapter 14)

Wow is right.

 Dani



Author's Response: is that a good wow? lol





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