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DaniD (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 03:00 am (Chapter 13b)

Well..I have such a better insight into Bryne now that I know about Uncle Benji. Why she hasn't been with anyone else since such a young age...and I am shocked that she has been with Miranda for as long as she has, and Mirand doesn't know about that. What is happening between Justin and Bryne is honest to goodness deep...IN LOVE..not just love..stuff. New for both of them it seems.

Ok..sounds like Bryne still thinks Justin is sleeping with Belinda..I think. It's hard to say. At what point is either one of them, or BOTH of them going to make a move to be each other's one and only? Is it in the cards?
Thanks for the great update..Lots of interesting insight in this chapter!

Dani




calinewgirl (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 01:31 am (Chapter 13b)

Wow is all I can say!!! "Do you love him?" Damn. She knows. And I think not only does she know it's a guy, I think she knows exactly who the guy is too. That's too bad man. That could fuck up JC's whole entire operation. ::shakes head in disappointment:: I always felt like some of Bryne's & Justin's creepings were a little too public in the first place and that's the worst way to keep a secret ... secret lol.

But anywho, can we get a more  detailed, physical description of Bryne and the other non-celeb characters? It doesn't have to be with pictures per se (although it VERY well could be hint, hint lol), but anything will help at this point because as of right now, I only know what Justin, Cam and Trace look like lol.

Great update! ~N




MissM69 (Signed) on Feb 28, 2008 11:26 pm (Chapter 13b)
oh my god this just keeps getting better and better can't wait for the next update :D



LaLa (Signed) on Feb 28, 2008 10:19 pm (Chapter 13b)
Oh this is getting deep.. I love this story girl keep it up. kudos, many many kudos.





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