Comments For Strictly Business
amai84 (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 12:00 pm (Chapter 11 b)
I've been reading this story for the past few days and I've finally caught up. I love it!
MochaB (Signed) on Feb 20, 2008 11:26 pm (Chapter 11 b)
ok...that was the hottest thing ever and it wasn't even sex! seriously! i don't even want to think about what you will write when they actually do do the deed because it will happen...hopefully soon. haha. I would like her to break it off with Miranda though, and if he actually wants her like he's said he does, he knows he should break it off with Cam and Belinda. But I don't know...all i know is that that was amazing. haha! i love this story. keep it coming please! :o)
LaLa (Signed) on Feb 20, 2008 07:02 pm (Chapter 11 b)
Oooh it getting complicated now. I don't know what I want more, for them to get it over with or break everything off with their significant others then go at it. More Please!
d_simplicity (Signed) on Feb 20, 2008 05:07 pm (Chapter 11 b)
Oh my fucking god!!!!!!!! OH MY gah!!! How can u leave off here? What a way to leave us hanging. I can't say I'm not nervous because I am, if bryne gives into Justin man...that's some complication but just...oh my gosh...update asap!!!!
DaniD (Signed) on Feb 20, 2008 05:01 pm (Chapter 11 b)
OMG that was hot..No sex really even happened and it was hot. I think my lap top might catch fire when I finally get to read a sex scene between these two! lol
Where did Miranda go? She doesn't have someone on the side to does she? That would be an interesting twist..
You can clearly see that Bryne is stepping outside the box that she had been in with Miranda..Not just sex with a MAN but sex with someone ELSE..Someone that she is falling for. But yet again I ask....WHAT IS JUSTIN GOING TO THINK OF THE FACT SHE HAS A GIRLFRIEND?!
Fantastic update as ALWAYS!
Dani
justinaham (Signed) on Feb 20, 2008 04:13 pm (Chapter 11 b)
OMFG get outta here ...lol
I would've thrown him down right then and there in the booth and had my way with him. Good update can't wait for the next one.
I would've thrown him down right then and there in the booth and had my way with him. Good update can't wait for the next one.
