Comments For Strictly Business
d_simplicity (Signed) on Feb 19, 2008 10:59 am (Chapter 11)

Woop I finally caught up and just damn girl!!! Justin and Bryne are two complex individuals god damn. One time I hate em, the next I love em esp when they can't deny each other. Ok, so firtly, I say Justin needs to stop this messing with all these women if he wants a real shot at Bry and second, she's confused because since Miranda is all she's ever known, these feelings for Justin are new to her since he's a guy but really, she's too uptight. I know it's strictly business...but all work and no play makes bry a dull girl. hehe. I just feel plain out sorry for belinda...she's...gonna get her heart broken. But anyway, I love this girl! I can't wait for an update. We need all these obstacles out of the way...

I don't know, let JC hook up with Miranda and Cam take a hike and Belinda find some other guy so Justin and Bry can be together. Those two are too hot together. We need some more make out scene or more? even though Justin is somewhat of an asshole in this, he's still cute for trying to get on Bry's good side like this...hehe. Ok I'm going to stop now. Lol Update asap! 




LaLa (Signed) on Feb 19, 2008 01:37 am (Chapter 11)
good update. can't wait for more



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Feb 18, 2008 10:16 pm (Chapter 11)
wow...this justs keeps getting more and more interesting



DaniD (Signed) on Feb 18, 2008 09:00 pm (Chapter 11)

Ok...7 martinis in that short amount of time would knock anyone on their ass, let alone someone who doesn't usually drink! lol

I'm thinking that when Miranda finds out..she's gonna' demand to know what's going on. JC's gotta be onto something too. He knows that Justin was upset..and has to know that unusual for him.

 BTW..I'm going to have to go back and read if Justin had a planned trip to LA..or did he run away? WHY did he go??!!

Thank you for your kind words in the last review response. You rock too! I can't get enough of your writing girl!

Dani






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