I'm so glad you updated. I was thinking I would have to way days and days lol

I really like this story a lot for several reasons. The main characters are complex which makes it easy to relate to them because readers are complex and to read about characters who make decisions and say the things they do because of a variety of experiences coupled with their personality, fears, ect ect is great.

I thought that I couldn't see Justin and Bryne together with her being a lesbian, but then we find out how her relationship with Miranda came about to be. Sounds like Bryne was sheltered growing up and didn't get to experience much of life to get to know herself. I do feel like Miranda may have preyed on her innocence and need to have someone when she was feeling alone. Your characters aren't one dimensional though, so there could be a deeper reason for Miranda manipulating the situation the way she did.

As for Justin, I can see why he's acted the way he has with women. He's just plain scared. And maybe it's because he had his heart broken before. But he's clearly trying to fill a void that can't be filled with meaningless women. It's like he has to have more than one for the time that any of them decide to pack their things and leave. He doesn't care because his feelings never got deep for any of the women in his life until he met Bryne. He doesn't know how to deal with it, and kissing her was the catalyst for that flood of raw emtion to finally come out on both sides, for him and Bryne.

In other words, I can't wait for more!

THAT was intense..and I'm just floored. I'm finally seeing some real romance between them and I love it! He wants all of her!! Great chapter.

So..what are our obstacles? Brynes is a lesbian with a serious girlfirend..Justin has a serious girlfirend. Justin has a lover who happens to be Bryne's best friend. Am I missing anything? lol Guess this is a chance to prove that love conquers all! Right?

Dani