Comments For Strictly Business
JoJo (Anonymous) on Feb 17, 2008 01:07 am (Chapter 9b)
i can't believe you just left it there!!! can't wait for the next update!! hope it's soon!


EllieBeans (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 09:05 pm (Chapter 9b)
Oh my gosh! Totally loving this story so far and I know it may be totally awful of me, but I need him to say yes and for them to hook up like now.


Gigi (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 08:21 pm (Chapter 9b)
Ok woe, just wow!


MissM69 (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 06:39 pm (Chapter 9b)

very evil of you to leave us hanging like for shame ;)

can't wait for the next update :D



DaniD (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 06:36 pm (Chapter 9b)

Girl...You are delving into some deep stuff here. The subject of right or wrong of homosexuality?? Gotta say, Brave story and I love that you are doing it.

Bryne is a woman who is discovering more to her sexuality, but in reverse to what I am used to hearing about. Brilliant idea!

Dani



watchoutforthecar (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 05:53 pm (Chapter 9b)
And you stop there?


LaLa (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 05:16 pm (Chapter 9b)
Yes, Yes, Yes he wants her! Please Please update I'm lovin' this story.


(Anonymous) on Feb 16, 2008 05:09 pm (Chapter 9b)
How could you leave us hanging like that! I'm going to kill you lol. It's amazing how complex your characters are. You're doing a great job so far!


calinewgirl (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 04:58 pm (Chapter 9b)

Wow!

I'm one of those horrible fiction readers who just loves to read but hates to review and never usually bothers to - I'm sure I'm not the only one sadly - but seriously, this has got to be one of the best fanfics I've ever read and I've been reading since I was 16 ... I'm 25 now lol.

In all those years and in all those stories, this is the first time I've read a fanfic with a lesbian spin and I must say, it's ingenious. Absolutely fantastic, so keep up the great work. Oh and I LOVE the speedy updates. I hope they continue. ~ N





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