Comments For Strictly Business
Shufflee (Signed) on Jan 13, 2010 10:15 pm (Chapter 1)
Wow you finally updated. I missed these crazy kids. Looking forward to more updates.



KLW (Signed) on Apr 11, 2008 02:06 pm (Chapter 1)
And the triangle gets bigger or so it seems. Keep up the good work.



sandy (Signed) on Apr 09, 2008 07:51 pm (Chapter 1)
many girls are on the pill for non-birth control reasons, just to control their periods and lesson the sypmtoms, so I don't think it was something that needed to be addressed in the story because she was a lesbian. Just my thoughts. But great update!! OMG. What is she doing staying in a dead relationship? She needs to be with Justin and if Miranda really loved her, she would want her to be happy even if that meant it wasn't with her.



sandy (Signed) on Apr 07, 2008 09:50 pm (Chapter 1)
NOO. She wants to be with Justin. Make it better please!!!



sandy (Signed) on Mar 19, 2008 02:12 pm (Chapter 1)
Oh NO!. Obviously she's not a total lesbian cause she feels so much for Justin. Miranda just needs to be taken out of the picture already and let Justin adn Bryne get together!!! Please make it work out!!!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Feb 18, 2008 04:44 pm (Chapter 1)
OMG I just read the first chap...and I love it!!! Now i can't wait to catch up. I'll let you know when I have. :)

Author's Response:

EEEK!..im excited, because I'm such a fan of Unexpected Love Affair!...and the new one with Justin working at McD's... and pretty much all of your work..lol




mozie (Anonymous) on Feb 16, 2008 07:44 pm (Chapter 1)
awesome more please



watchoutforthecar (Signed) on Jan 11, 2008 04:05 pm (Chapter 1)
I ment to comment earlier, but my sidekick didn't allow me too... I really like this story! Very interesting... 
However, I REALLY liked the other story you started, where Bryne was a model and she and Justin were shooting the CMAR video. I have been without a computer for a few days so I was reading it on my sidekick, and as I walked into Walgreens when I was reading, CMAR was playing in the story which I thought was hysterical. Maybe you can keep that story going but just use different names?
Anyway, keep up the good writing!





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