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TrousersnakeLove (Signed) on Mar 28, 2010 01:31 pm (Chapter 27b)
Wow. I'm sooo hooked. This is really really reeeaally well written.



GuitarTMG (Anonymous) on Mar 24, 2010 08:58 pm (Chapter 27b)
I was so excited to see a new post to this story. Please keep them coming.



Tina (Anonymous) on Mar 21, 2010 12:46 pm (Chapter 27b)
I feel bad for justin. Fix it. :(



Tina (Anonymous) on Mar 21, 2010 02:42 am (Chapter 27)
Ohhh..Can't wait!



destressed reader (Anonymous) on Mar 11, 2010 10:04 pm (Chapter 26)
Look....honestly loving the story BUT WE NEED AN UPDATE!!! This just cant go on any longer....I've been waiting for an update for over a month and aparently...its time dammit! Please update, my life depends on what happens next. The next time you feel like updating a chapter that doesnt have a significant part to the outcome of the plot dont bother. Feel free to let us know what's happing from Justin's POV. Truly doing a great job...all i ask is for a simple two-three chapter update at a time. Thank you and good night. Your's truly, Destressed reader.



Shufflee (Signed) on Jan 13, 2010 10:15 pm (Chapter 1)
Wow you finally updated. I missed these crazy kids. Looking forward to more updates.



JoJo (Anonymous) on Jan 13, 2010 04:10 pm (Chapter 26)
So I reread this last night which is why I'm not reviewing until now. I was up until about 4 AM just reading. I forgot how much I loved this story. Bryne's created a huge mess for herself! The first time she's ever gets with a guy it's Justin Timberlake and then JC! I wish!! There is so much drama and I love it...the whole love triangle or square/rectangle if you count Miranda. It's entertaining to read so I really hope you keep updating. Can't wait to see what's in store for these characters.

Author's Response:

I do the same thing!!! i read..then re read..Im soo happy you like it!! Bryne is just a plain mess..i think i have gone full circle with how i feel about her character...and drama is my middle name!! I love it. Thank you for reading!!

 




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jan 12, 2010 01:20 pm (Chapter 26)
I just read the whole story in one sitting.Great story and AMAZING writing. I can't wait for more updates.

Author's Response: Thank you soooooooooooo much!!!! I went from having serious writers block to the wheels spinning like crazy with new ideas for this story...i love feedback!!! so thank you very much!!!



Tina (Anonymous) on Jan 10, 2010 09:10 pm (Chapter 25)
Oh, you're back! I'm glad you didn't give up on this story!

Author's Response: it was hard...i was stuck for soo long! Thank you for reading and commenting...it inspires me to continue with this diabolical mess  otherwise known as Bryne's so called life



Shufflee (Signed) on Jun 02, 2009 05:20 am (Chapter 24b)
awww, so sad for Miranda



mzmillion (Signed) on May 31, 2009 01:58 pm (Chapter 24b)
ok ok, eventhough she is a screaming whore, this chapter was good. I still can't see a realistic ending with her and Justin being together...but whatever....lol.



Marissa (Signed) on May 31, 2009 01:07 pm (Chapter 24b)
Ah, this is so good! Keep it coming, girl!



mzmillion (Signed) on May 30, 2009 02:20 pm (Chapter 22)

I read this whole story in two days and this chapter alone makes me want to stop. She is a fucking whore and I hate her dumb ass, Justin is a mess, and JC is a fucking asshole and opportunist...this story makes me sick, it already did when Justin was fucking her bff but I went ahead and read it anyway, now I'm just pissed....ughhh....there is no realistic way that this story can end well and that pisses me off...

 

...sorry, I was venting out my dislike of this chapter...




Shufflee (Signed) on May 30, 2009 06:27 am (Chapter 24)
yayyyyy you're still updating!!



monique32 (Signed) on May 28, 2009 05:49 pm (Chapter 24)
Please keep writing this. i recently joined the archive and i have read this story like 5 times already. your writing is beautiful and desciptive. keep up the good work.





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