*GASP* HOLY SHIZNET! That was pretty HOT, I agree this man could drive any girl crazy, I mean LOOK AT THE MAN! *swoons* Hmm..its up to you if you would write more though, its pretty good..but overall, I think for me, it should end here, it may leave more to the imagination for us readers... ;)

I also liked these lines here earlier:  

Chris rolled his window down and eyed J.C. suspiciously as he made his way back to the car, “You’re seriously going to leave?” Chris incredulously asked.

 “No, I’m staying, now stop smirking asshole.”J.C. said leaning down so he was eye level with Chris.

“I knew it!” Chris exclaimed his eyes lighting up with recognition.

I can hear Chris saying this! LOL 

Great job though...