Comments For Deceitful Start
theusagirl (Signed) on Mar 23, 2015 09:19 pm (Chapter 1)

“SHE NEEDS TO MEET C!”Chris exclaimed almost jumping up out of his chair.

“What?”I asked confused looking back and forth between the three faces that were now all staring back at me grinning.

LOL I love Chris! :D Yeah she does need to meet him..I mean, I TOTALLY agree about the "lost in his eyes" thing...OMG! I wouldn't be able to concentrate..LOL

This is a good start..I'll read more soon.. :)




LadyX (Signed) on Mar 23, 2015 05:29 pm (Chapter 1)

Cute!

That man can sing his heart out and pound the hell out of a piano...

Interesting start, I wonder how long Leah will be able to hide that she knows who they are and what kind of clash it may create.

 I like the title, it fits!






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