Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 15, 2014 07:22 pm (Pizzas and Beers)
Super cute and fluffy! I like that you give insight into both Ari and JC's head and what they are thinking from their point of view. 

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting on that, I find that it is easier for me to go forward with the story when I can put both of the POV's in.



theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 15, 2014 12:02 am (Phone calls and Fruit)

They KISSED! He kissed her! *squee* I want this man, I need this man..I sound like a crazy teenaged girl..LOL

I'm so happy for these two.. :) I think they are gonna be so much more then friends after this, am I right?? ;)



Author's Response: Keep reading ;)



theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 14, 2014 11:50 pm (Late Nights and Guard Dogs)

GUH! JC is so sweet in this story! OMG! I love it.. :D

But poor Ari.. :( Who was the looch that broke in?? Hmm..I have a strange feeling that Kenny may have something to do with this, after JC shot him down, maybe Kenny has friends..

And interesting name for a dog, Maestro..I can hear that dog making a CD..LOL



Author's Response: Good insticts there...so much that I hadn't even thought of that...hahahah. Maybe that can be of use later...hmmm..



theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 14, 2014 10:53 pm (Tacos and Text Messages)

This was a sweet chapter.. :) I love how their friendship is blossoming, I know that probably in reality, he acts like this, its what makes us fans love him even more..

I'm enjoying this story a whole lot..



Author's Response: I agree that the fans have probably figured a big part of his personality and that it's mostly normal...lol



theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 14, 2014 10:37 pm (Inspiration and Boy Bands)

JC on top?? Yes please.. ;) lolz and then I'll lay him down and -ok let me stop..LOL

I SO laughed when Ari told him that she was a Brian Littrell fan..tee hee, then she texted him later that it was JC all along..oh to exchange digits with that man..and everything else..one can dream.. :P

And I also giggled at these lines here: So I lied. You have always definitely been my favorite.

Grinning like a fool, he closes the message and slides the phone back into his pocket as his friend Jimmy walks into the room.

“What’s the goofy grin for?” his friend asks, taking the chair beside him and placing his stuff on the table.

“Inspiration.”

Nicely done..I'll read more.. Oh! I was supposed to update my story today, but I do have another story thats completed already, feel free to read/review them whenever you get the chance...thankies. :)



Author's Response:

I like their back and forth a whole lot as well, I think that's what makes them good for each other.

I'll check out your story!




theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 14, 2014 04:28 pm (Fire Escapes and BLT's)

WOOT! *fist pump*

Tell him JC! :D

Ok, let me backtrack, I can totally see his expression when he's saying this:

I just…we’ll take the…other way up.” She answers, grabbing his elbow gently and pulling him toward an adjacent alleyway.

“The other way up?” he questions, his voice sounding extremely uncomfortable as she pulls him into the alleyway “You’re not actually a rabid fan that has some fantasy of tying me up in an alley and doing unspeakable things to me before stuffing my body into a dumpster are you? Cause if you are, I swear my Mom will start looking for me within a few weeks.”

LOL

And if JC comes to my house looking like THAT.. :P I would... ;)hmm..no I have to respect him, yep..

Anyways, Kenny is a jerk, and I LOVE that JC took his shirt off and told the guy OFF..

This is going great so far! *reads next chapter*



Author's Response: I love your reviews, they make me smile. :)



kb4jc (Signed) on Jun 12, 2014 08:41 pm (Tell Me)
U better write more and that was good for a first time.  Keep up the good work!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!  I love hearing from my readers and what they think!



theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 12, 2014 08:03 pm (Dead Batteries and Sugary Drinks)

Hi! :D *waves wildly*

I have been scanning this story for the past few days and haven't had the time to review, but now I do! AHH!

These lines here: JC Chasez. Fucking JC Chasez is sitting next to me and talking to me. What do I do? What. The. Fuck

OMG! What would I do?? I would be like Ari..LOL

I also like these lines here: Looking like a total creepy stalker girl that wants to have his babies? Will become a check if I don't get my ass in gear.

HA!

Oh! and I also like how you described his hands, my mind seriously went to the gutter..lolz

So far, this story is getting good! I'll review more when I get the chance.. :)

Nice to meet you, well not in person, but here I mean..lolz Ok I'll stop rambling now..tee hee..



Author's Response: OMG! I ♥ your detailed review! If you liked that description of his hands hurry and read all the way to Chapter 8&9. Be prepared...;)

Author's Response: OMG! I ♥ your detailed review! If you liked that description of his hands hurry and read all the way to Chapter 8&9. Be prepared...;)



AceofSpades (Signed) on Jun 12, 2014 06:40 pm (Tell Me)
*whistles* That was hot! Great writing, grea description and I liked the back and forth of the point of views as well

Author's Response: Teehee. Happy you enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Teehee. Happy you enjoyed it!



Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 12, 2014 05:50 pm (Tell Me)
Well my dear....that was H-O-T H-O-T H-O-T!! Very nicely done ;)

Author's Response: *bliush*



AceofSpades (Signed) on Jun 12, 2014 12:43 pm (Names and Hands)
Ahh, a cliffhanger! Great chapter and awesome story

Author's Response: Loving that you're loving the story! Check out the new chapter!



champ (Signed) on Jun 11, 2014 11:41 pm (Names and Hands)

keep them coming... :D

 



Author's Response: Check out the new chapter and thanks for reviewing again! :)



kb4jc (Signed) on Jun 10, 2014 11:45 pm (Names and Hands)
Awesome so far keep writing I'm addicted!!!

Author's Response: Your wish is my command ;)



Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 10, 2014 09:28 pm (Names and Hands)

Gah! Cliff hanger much??

Really adorable how JC worked his way around getting her a new camera without having to use his money to pay for it *sigh* :)



Author's Response: You can stop hanging on to the cliff now, nextg chapter is up ;)



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jun 10, 2014 05:22 pm (Wet Dog and Pool Parties)
Why'd you end it there?! Tease :)

Author's Response: Mwahahahahahahaha! ;)  Working on the next chapter now.





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