theusagirl (Signed) on Mar 03, 2015 09:30 pm (Nostalgia and Bed Sheets)

This was HOT! I love it! 50 Shades of Chasez...YES PLEASE! ;)

Earlier in this chapter, these lines here: It had been romantic, thoughtful and slightly cheesy. In other words, exactly like JC. Yep.. :)

Now, I love that JC told Ari to relax after a long week, that marble tub sounds wonderful right now, I had a busy work day today, and its only Tuesday.. 

Oh and these lines here made me giggle: " So, what are you wearing?” she asks and he can tell that her tone is still a little hesitant.

“A bed sheet,” he answers simply, a smirk growing on his lips when she doesn’t say anything right away.

LOL ;)

But above all, this was a good chapter, I'll read/review more soon...thanks for the update. 



Author's Response: JC in a bed sheet and nothing else is the stuff dreams are made of...wet dreams at least ;). Happy you're able to catch up on the story,  more coming soon! 



Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Mar 03, 2015 08:42 pm (Flights and Broken Hearts)
I need the next chapter!!!! My heart hurts thinking of JC hurting like that. Loving this story, my favorite line was when he said you're my family, love it!!!

Author's Response: Aw, sweet isn't he?  Next chapter coming probably tonight!  Just have to make some corrections first!  Thanks for your review Lyndsi, can't wait to hear what you think of the next chapter. 



Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Mar 02, 2015 06:41 pm (Weddings and Ugly Hats)
I love this story!! I'm always so happy to see when it's updated. Loved that you took a picture from Lances wedding and used it for a scene in the story. I mean I know I'm not the only one, whose ovaries exploded with that pic!! Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response:

Thank you Lyndsi! I'm so happy to see a review from you again, I always love to hear from you! I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter and the picture. When I saw it I was like, AHA! (And yes, a side of exploded ovaries came with as well). If you return to the last chapter, I actually added a picture there too that I'd forgotten to post when I originally put the chapter up.

Another chapter coming tomorrow probalby, stay tuned ;).




elle-miranda (Signed) on Mar 01, 2015 02:10 pm (Nostalgia and Bed Sheets)
and while JC's taking another shower, I think I need a cigarette...and I don't smoke. wooooo. :D

Author's Response: And you've already read the chapter like twice before...hee hee, that's some powerful stuff eh?



AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Feb 27, 2015 05:56 pm (Nostalgia and Bed Sheets)
LOL. I loved the ending. Great chapter and I'm glad to see an update

Author's Response: I'm currently working on an update for yours!  I had to get this one out of my head first! 



theusagirl (Signed) on Feb 08, 2015 10:19 pm (Scripts and Pedicures)

THIS! :D

You know,” she says with a pointed look. “Yes, he has been blessed with many abilities but you both have your strengths. He cannot match you in any way in producing, songwriting and actual vocal ability, which I think as primarily a musical artist you should be proud of. You can sing circles around that guy and that’s saying something.”

I SO AGREE! :D Amazing! but OMG when he sang on Lance and Michael's wedding..I rewatched that so many times! His voice is SO magical..and does things to me, let alone, the rest of his true fans. :)

Now..the "Pass Me By" song, I DID heard it, it sounds so beautiful.. *happy sigh*

Great chapter, love how their relationship is going so far! :D

Nice job and thanks for the update!  



Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed it! CONGRATS on your win for best reviewer! Absolutely and totally deserved!

Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed it! CONGRATS on your win for best reviewer! Absolutely and totally deserved!



elle-miranda (Signed) on Feb 05, 2015 10:53 pm (Scripts and Pedicures)

They're so damn cute! Also, everytime I read dialogue wherein JC uses the term 'honey' I have to physically stop for a moment because I picture him saying it...that WAY he says it...and I lose the ability to focus for a little bit. 

 

and Lance's special tonight?! #heartthud. I can't WAIT to read what you do with the next chapter!!  



Author's Response: Lol. I do the exact same thing with the 'honey', that's why I try to use it sparringly so that it continues to have that impact. I need longer recovery time for 'Mama' though...and it is creepy to me if anyone else says it but him. When he says it it's just...gah. Lol. Only for use during Sexy Time though ;)

Author's Response: Lol. I do the exact same thing with the 'honey', that's why I try to use it sparringly so that it continues to have that impact. I need longer recovery time for 'Mama' though...and it is creepy to me if anyone else says it but him. When he says it it's just...gah. Lol. Only for use during Sexy Time though ;)



AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Feb 04, 2015 06:05 pm (Scripts and Pedicures)

“You’re just so…different,” he admits quietly.

That broke my heart a little bit for some reason. Great chapter.



Author's Response: Sad eh? I'm glad you enjoyed it. Another chapter should follow soon.



theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 31, 2015 10:05 pm (Fan Fiction and Symmetrical Carrots)

OMG THE SHOWER SCENE WAS SO HOT! It was steamy and perfect and just AHHH! :D And I can listen to JC singing lyrics like that..had me laughing..LOL But Wait..have I heard that  "Pass Me By song?? I listened to the rest of the unreleased demos that was posted, I don't remember that one..I gotta double check...lolz

And earlier in this chapter, I SO laughed at this! " When I go see my guy, I’ll ask him if he would take another client. I don’t see why he wouldn’t.”

Ari chuckles and raises a brow at his turned back, “You have a guy?”
LMAO

Overall, this was a very good chapter, so many fun moments, can't possibly post them all..awesome update!  Love LOVE! :D

 

 



Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it! Did you end up checking out the song? Wasn't it hilariously perfect? 




elle-miranda (Signed) on Jan 26, 2015 04:16 pm (Fan Fiction and Symmetrical Carrots)
LOOOOOVES IT! and i can't remember if i said it or not, but the last line, "i think that's the best damn song you've ever written..." is PERFECTION! 

Author's Response: :) :D :)




Nik (Signed) on Jan 18, 2015 01:04 pm (Dead Batteries and Sugary Drinks)
I absolutely love the start of this and you have a great writing voice!

Author's Response: Woo, a new reader! Enjoy the rest of the chapters and thanks for taking the time to review!



theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 16, 2015 08:33 pm (Past and Present)

YES! :D I totally agree about the unreleased *NSYNC demos, I love the "Think About That." its like new *NSYNC/JC music for us.. *squee*

Ok, now on this chapter, its been a while yes, but poor Ari, I don't blame her for being insecure sometimes that JC seems withdrawn, he really gives everything into his work, and then sometimes it just disappears and goes into dust.. :( I agree on the Girl Radical thing, they sorta disbanded and went their own way..I tried to support them as I much as I can..but still, deep down I knew it wasn't gonna work out, but now JC has a new project coming up, hope that one works..

I also like these lines:  Ari smiles softly and nods, “Yeah, I know. I’ve noticed that the last little while and just wanted to give you time and space to work it out. I figured you’d come to me when you were ready.” She leans down and presses her lips gently to his in an affectionate kiss. “Thank you for sharing.” She kisses his cheek, “You know everything is going to be okay right?”

JC slides his hand slowly up and down her back and finally smiles slightly before he nods, “I think so. Thank you for listening.”

Good update..hope you are doing good! :)



Author's Response: Hi there! I didn't even have to glance at the username to know who this beautiful review came from...:) I am doing good, getting a hang of the baby stuff! I'm glad you liked the chapter. Another one should be coming soon!



Rubysoho (Anonymous) on Jan 15, 2015 04:24 pm (Past and Present)
so excited to you have updated. Love,love LOVE this story 😀

Author's Response: So happy you enjoyed it! Thank you for taking the time to review!



elle-miranda (Signed) on Jan 15, 2015 11:47 am (Past and Present)
looooove it! but you already knew that! ;-)

Author's Response: You made it awesome! :D You really made me flesh it out which is what it needed! You may also, you may not have realised this, have made yourself my indefinite beta...



AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Jan 14, 2015 09:36 pm (Past and Present)

Hey, we both got an update in today! And yes, it was well worth the wait. haha

I mean, give a girl a heart attack woud ya. Nice change with the "Girls Aloud" part. I thought for sure he was talking about her.

My favorite line: “Oh does it now…maybe we should...check that out…You know, for warranty’s sake.”

You deserve every nomination! I can't wait for more. 



Author's Response: Aw, you're sweet. Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm really happy that I freaked you out a little (sorry! :P) as that was what I was aiming for. More should come soon!





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