KrisB (Anonymous) on Sep 10, 2015 04:40 am (Tacos and Text Messages)
I REALLY liked this chapter. I like how fun they are together and I like that he's starting to open up some.

Author's Response: I feel like they would be laughing a lot together in real life!



KrisB (Anonymous) on Sep 10, 2015 04:07 am (Fire Escapes and BLT's)

I LOVE the idea of JC naked in my apt....even if it's only to wash his clothes. And I love love love that he answered the door half naked to get Kenny to shut up. Chivalry isn't dead!



Author's Response: That scene popped out of nowhere in my head and I love it too!



AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Jun 17, 2015 03:58 pm (Epilogue )
Awwww, that was a cute ending. I loved it.

Author's Response: :D Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!



theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 16, 2015 10:29 pm (Attorney-Client Privilege and Bigger Boobs)

HAHAHAHAHAH! Go get Tyler JC! LOL

Aww love the convo that Ari and Tyler had though, that was nice of them, and so glad that Ari told JC how she felt, she LOVES him now! 

I admit though, I needed a refresher on this story, I kinda forgot for a second...would read more soon when I get the chance... :) 



Author's Response: I liked that little interaction between the two of them as well. I look forward to hearing your thoughts on the next chapters now that the story is over! 



Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Jun 16, 2015 07:33 pm (Thinking Out Loud)
I love this!! I will now hear JC singing this song everytime I hear it!! I so do not want this story to end!! Can't wait to read the epilogue.

Author's Response: Yay! Yeah, I loved this song before it was a single and have always pictured JC singing it. It was actually the driving force for this whole story from the beginning. Bonus that it became a smash hit on the radio as well!



elle-miranda (Signed) on Apr 11, 2015 10:23 am (Breakfast in Bed...take two)
*sniff* love this whole scene. love the proposal. love them. all of the love!!

Author's Response: Pink puffy hearts to you too!



AceofSpades (Signed) on Apr 09, 2015 11:39 am (Breakfast in Bed...take two)
Well, I don't know how I missed so many updates, but I'm all caught up! Yes, he should've gotten down on one knee, but yay they're engaged! :)

Author's Response: Yay! You're caught up! Glad you enjoyed it!



Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Apr 08, 2015 10:08 pm (Breakfast in Bed...take two)
Be still my heart... That was perfect! He is just the sweetest.. I am sad to see the story end but so happy we get one more chapter! Cant wait to see how you finish it. I am still hoping for a sequel!!

Author's Response: Yay! Happy you liked it! You're actually getting two more chapters ;) (if you include the epilogue). We'll see about the sequel...hihihihih.



elle-miranda (Signed) on Mar 26, 2015 10:29 pm (Attorney-Client Privilege and Bigger Boobs)
i love the chapter title! (and the chapter, natch!) i'm going to be sad to see this one over...but i am so looking forward to what you have in store!!

Author's Response: Thanks! You'll be the first to see what else I have in store ;)



Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Mar 23, 2015 08:33 pm (Attorney-Client Privilege and Bigger Boobs)
Seeing an update just made my bad day a good one! I loved Tyler in this chapter. When JC said his peace about Ari working just melted my heart! Can't wait to see the rest. I don't want it to end! Maybe a sequel?????

Author's Response: Aw! I'm happy it helped your day!  New chapter probably up tomorrow or day after. I never considered a sequel, hmmm. I'd have to see if there was interest! I did have an idea for an outtake or two, so maybe we'll see! Hope your night goes better than your day went! Thanks for your review! 



theusagirl (Signed) on Mar 07, 2015 01:40 pm (Regrets and Refunds)

I wouldn't want to use JC's credit card either, come to think of it, I have written a story a couple of years ago and posted it on here, regarding JC's lost credit card and a girl found it, and returned it back to him, its called "Re-Route" Check it out when you get the chance.. :)

But anyway, I'm glad that JC took Joey's advice, but he needs to cool off his jets right now and know that Ari is an independent girl, that she likes to get things on her own, I'm sure girls would take this advantage and would take all the gifts from JC like a peace offering..lolz in a relationship, we either have to share or buy things separately..communication is key.

This was a very good chapter, I enjoyed this one, thanks for the updates.. :) 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the last three!

I have read your Re-Route story before, long time ago because it sounds very familiar. Think I will check it out again to refresh my memory. Thanks again for being an awesome reviewer!




theusagirl (Signed) on Mar 07, 2015 01:08 pm (Flights and Broken Hearts)

*cries* Poor JC!  :( He's going through a desperate time that his father Roy had a heart attack, I hope everything would be alright..

On a lighter note, the SNL 40 thing was just ehh.. -_- I knew the guys were appearing there and not performing but still, they've could've shown *NSYNC Supersize or something..but oh well..

*reads next chapter* 

 

 



Author's Response: Yeah, I wish we would have seen something but my expectations weren't raised as we knew from the start there were no plans on having anything. Plus it would have turned into the JT show anyway (probably, since SNL is his thing). Ah well!



theusagirl (Signed) on Mar 07, 2015 12:44 pm (Weddings and Ugly Hats)

Don't wait JC..DON'T WAIT! Tell her...you know you want to.. :) These lines here:

“I was over at Lance’s. They recorded us discussing me singing at the wedding.”

“Just now? Dressed like that?” She raises an eyebrow, pointedly looking over his outfit of black track pants, black shirt, black jacket and black hat. He hadn’t even shaved.

“What’s wrong with this?” he says, half offended as he looks down at himself.

“First of all I hate those friggen hats,” she says and reaches over to take it off his head with a laugh. “They do nothing for that beautiful face of yours. Second, what’s with all of the black? Are you in mourning that you’re the only bachelor left of the five or something?”

When Lance and Michael's wedding aired on TV and JC came in to Lance's house looking like that..I AGREE! LOL But at least he wasn't wearing that ridiculous fedora..HA! :D

Now, I love the necklace that JC bought Ari, she deserves something nice... :)

And I also love how the wedding was going, would've loved to see that clip of the guys dancing to "Bye Bye Bye" though.. :D

Nicely done.. *reads next chapter* 



Author's Response: Wouldn't that have been awesome?! I was holding out to the very end of the wedding special hoping they'd show a little of the reception/dancing and that we'd get a glimpse of that...Ah well. They were probably all kinda tipsy...LOL.



Me (Anonymous) on Mar 04, 2015 11:01 pm (Regrets and Refunds)
This was good, but there's a bit missing at the end. It like stops in the middle of a word.

Author's Response: Oh my gosh! I'm sorry about that! I went back for a small edit after I posted it and it must have gotten wonky. I fixed it. THANKS!



Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Mar 04, 2015 06:55 pm (Regrets and Refunds)

oh man you're leaving it there??? I need more! I just want to smack JC for yelling like that, but I have a feeling that Karen will take care of that. Can't wait to see Ari's reaction and how they work through this. Great job and hurry with the next update! 



Author's Response: Sorry! You won't have to wait <i>that</i> long for an update though. Actually Tyler will take care of that ;). Look forward to hearing what you think when I post the next chapter!





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