Comments For Sweet Child of Mine
Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Mar 03, 2014 09:30 pm (Chapter 24)
So freaking hot!!! Absence makes the heart grow fonder right??? I would have given JC the cold shoulder when he answered that phone. I'm can't wait to see what happens next because I have a feeling JC is gonna revert to his old ways for at least a little while. I don't know I think something is coming things seem to be kinda unsettled even though they are both falling in love. 

Author's Response: I figured she'd go easy on him the first time he did it. Updates being worked on ;) Thanks for reading!



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Mar 03, 2014 05:46 pm (Chapter 23)

Wow, super hot phone sex! What a turn on!

 

And I can totally picture GR going at it. 11 girls would proabbly be headache inducing! 



Author's Response: Yep, that's always been my thought. I can only imagine what he must have to put up with.



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Mar 03, 2014 05:05 pm (Chapter 22)
Poor Annie. it must be tough for her with JC being away all the time. I'm sure they'll work it out. 



theusagirl (Signed) on Mar 01, 2014 10:01 pm (Chapter 23)

That's right JC, go to dinner..lolz

Well that was fun, in the middle of conference room..LOL I actually scanned this yesterday, but didn't have time to review cause had a bad day..and now I'm okay.. :)

But anyways, these lines here, kinda makes you wonder what JC actually goes through:

Whatever. You don’t have to be a bitch about it!”

“I’m not being a bitch but you totally took over that interview! There are eleven of us in this group and you were acting as though it was all about you! It’s not Alex Radical it’s Girl Radical!”

“Whatever, you-“

“Stop!” JC had had enough. “Nobody says anything until we get to the next interview.”

Hmm..

And earlier, I liked that Emma-Claire and Annie were watching "Fox and Hound", and I quote, "For goodness sake you're hurting my foot woman!" LOL Love that movie..

Above all, nicely done on this chapter, looking forward for more, I'll see if I have time to update my stories soon.. :)



Author's Response: I often wonder how many cat fights he hears with 11 women around all the time. Thanks for reading!! Look forward to your updates



elle-miranda (Signed) on Feb 28, 2014 10:26 pm (Chapter 23)
Wowie! Sexting with JC? Hot stuff! Loved the chapter; great work! :-D

Author's Response: thanks! I really love your stuff by the way :)



Megan (Anonymous) on Feb 28, 2014 09:57 am (Chapter 23)
Nothing like a little phone sex to help with the tension ;). 

Author's Response: haha exactly :) 



Megan (Anonymous) on Feb 24, 2014 11:16 pm (Chapter 22)
Poor Annie and her having to figure out how to deal with JC being gone all the time now :(. Lol, yes it did get a little steamy there at the end ;). Good update, anxious to read more! :)

Author's Response: More on the way soon :) 



theusagirl (Signed) on Feb 24, 2014 07:09 pm (Chapter 22)

YES IT WAS!

Is it hot in here or what?? I like these lines here:

I don’t want to think about tomorrow,” Annie whispered, her head resting on JC’s shoulder. They didn’t move. He was still inside of her and Annie didn’t want to let go.

“Then don’t,” JC whispered, and let out a sigh. “Then don’t.”

I can imagine him saying that..

I like the fact that they managed to fit into their schedules, well JC did, even though he was a bit late, but you know, he's totally worth the wait..

This is gonna be tough that JC is gonna go all the way to Korea while Annie stays with Emma-Claire..I'm sure things are gonna be fine..aww..I would be a bit sad though, but if we communicate all the time and things, I'll be fine, I trust him.. :)

Now..HE BETTER NOT DO ANYTHING DUMB WHILE IN KOREA! Or else he's gonna deal with me.. lolz

I enjoyed this chapter! After a long work day,,this was a great read, especially at the end.. :D



Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked it :) 



Megan (Anonymous) on Feb 18, 2014 04:43 pm (Chapter 21)
Gah, I love this story! It's so realistic and awesome! That stupid girl for putting those negative thoughts into Annie's head about JC being a player. Can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: Working on the next chapter. Trying to rid myself of writer's block so I can get out the goods soon :) Thanks as always for reading!



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Feb 15, 2014 10:23 pm (Chapter 21)
Okay, I am DYING at the mirror part!!! I remember reading that on a forum a while back! Good stuff!! I'm screaming!!! 

Author's Response: I read that, too, a few years ago and felt like it was best to incorporate here ;) LOL Hope you've got your voice back from screaming! More to come....



theusagirl (Signed) on Feb 15, 2014 09:42 pm (Chapter 21)

Ok where did this biotch came from..hmph! “Did your friend say JC? I’m assuming it’s just a coincidence but you’re not with JC Chasez are you?” the woman was much taller than Annie and glowered down at her. “Because if you are, good luck. That man’s the worst player in Hollywood!”

I would give her a piece of my mind..but I gotta remember violence is not the answer, hmm..maybe one sucker punch  from me won't hurt. :P

Anyways, on a lighter note, when Annie and JC tried that out-of-body experience and the mirror image of them making love, THAT was HOT! I enjoyed that little moment there. Tee hee.

This was a REALLY good chapter! Looking forward to more.. :D



Author's Response: LOL out of body experience would be right....yeah it was fun writing that part. Working on the next chapter ;)



Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Feb 15, 2014 01:08 pm (Chapter 21)
Love it. Loved Lance and Michael showing up, loved Annie talking with her sister. I think him being away is going to be interested. Have I said I loved it yet?????

Author's Response: I think you might've said it once or twice ;) hehe glad you like it!! Working on chapter 22 now!!



theusagirl (Signed) on Feb 10, 2014 07:30 pm (Chapter 20)

HOT! :D I would LOVE to wake up with this man on my bed.. Woot! But then again, don't we all?? ;)

Anyways..these lines here: Annie knew it had never been this way with anyone else. That desperation, that longing to have the other person fill her up and fill her up completely had been lost on other suitors. JC had been the only one who could make her long for him even when he wasn’t with her. She could already feel the heat between her legs and the aching and burning she felt whenever he was touching her.

Thats right, only JC freakin Chasez could do that..tee hee..

So, it looks like Annie may still be uncertain about moving in with him or not, or is afraid to actually open up to him, hmm..but it looks like things are working out, more than I can count if you know what I mean... :P

And the thought of JC picking up Maggie's call then transferred to Annie, and JC was teasing and she was freaking out..HA! Priceless..

Great job, I enjoyed this chapter a whole lot.. :D thanks for updating..




Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Feb 08, 2014 11:06 pm (Chapter 20)
So so so good. Hot and steamy is the best. Annie is right to be worried, but I like that they are voicing their thoughts with each other. Can't wait to read the next chapter.



Megan (Anonymous) on Feb 08, 2014 09:52 pm (Chapter 20)
Woof dah...steamy indeed! ;). I would be mortified if my boyfriend's mother saw me the morning after...jeeze. Can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: Hehe right? Hope you liked ch 21! It's got a little steam to it as well ;)





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