Comments For Card Castle
elle-miranda (Signed) on Jan 17, 2015 09:28 pm (Somewhere You Can't Follow)
it's so cute that Annaleigh completely doesn't realize that Darren feels the same way about her. and i hope her parents let her go to O-town!!



Unicornmaiden13 (Signed) on Oct 10, 2013 09:27 am (Somewhere You Can't Follow)
Wowsers, this is great! Everything flows so smoothly and naturally. I could develop a very clear image and your dialogue is spot-on. Nice work, mate!

Author's Response: Thank you! I was worried about how this chapter turned out, but I'm glad you liked it





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