Pumples (Signed) on Apr 17, 2015 11:53 am (
Chapter 1 - Hello, New Life)
Needing everything to be in its right place, now that sounds familiar. I'm liking the sound of Adeline already!
Hope Lance manages to at least make her feel welcome so she doesn't have to use that knife!
Pumples (Signed) on Apr 17, 2015 11:51 am (
Prologue - Goodbye, Los Angeles)
Giving it all up for a job she thinks might be hell... Adeleine must be pretty desperate to get away. I wonder what she's running from.
elle-miranda (Signed) on Feb 12, 2015 11:58 pm (
Chapter 20 - Not So Fast... (Part 2))
ugh. i hate mackenzie. any chance this turns into a homicide story?
elle-miranda (Signed) on Feb 05, 2015 12:12 am (
Chapter 18 - Moving On)
so, yeah. i'm smiling. huuuuuge grin. i'm so glad she said yes. and that she's leaving her douche of a husband.
but i also have this...feeling...that something is not right with the missing shawl.
elle-miranda (Signed) on Jan 31, 2015 04:42 pm (
Chapter 17 - Home)
Lance is so sweet. And the song was the perfect accompaniment to this chapter!
elle-miranda (Signed) on Jan 20, 2015 01:15 am (
Chapter 15 - Vows)
DAMN YOU I'M SUPPOSED TO BE GOING TO BED!!
elle-miranda (Signed) on Jan 20, 2015 12:53 am (
Chapter 14 - Mirror)
sigh. oh addy. dump the loser husband. ;-) in all seriousness, i LOVE the way you've written her. too often i see divorce characterized as this easy choice and easy-to-deal with situation, and lord knows it's not. and i love to see that struggle play out with addy; despite the fact that she clearly loves lance, it isn't so easy to walk away from her husband--even if he is a douchebag loser. (oh, sorry. i'm probably not supposed to think that...yet.)
elle-miranda (Signed) on Jan 06, 2015 11:48 pm (
Chapter 13 - Unfaithful)
awww! she's going to see him. YAY!
and this: “Well if you had worded it that way in the first place – my panties find plenty of time off lately.” was my FAVORITE LINE! haha!
elle-miranda (Signed) on Jan 06, 2015 10:52 pm (
Chapter 12 - Drowning)
awww. coney island was so sweet. and i really love what's happening between them.
(also, dammit, i'm supposed to be reading ONE chapter a night. meanwhile...on to the next one...)
elle-miranda (Anonymous) on Dec 31, 2014 10:34 pm (
Chapter 4 - Disaster Strikes)
but, i mean, he kind of deserved it.
elle-miranda (Signed) on Dec 31, 2014 07:45 pm (
Chapter 3 - Black Slacks and Business First)
panic attack. :( terrible feeling, but you captured it perfectly!
elle-miranda (Signed) on Dec 25, 2014 07:43 pm (
Chapter 1 - Hello, New Life)
<<“I promised to be on my best behavior,” he said. “This is the best behavior I can give you tonight.”>>
I'm liking bratty-Lance and I'm anticipating Adeline cutting him down to size....can't wait!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 07, 2013 12:59 pm (
Prologue - Goodbye, Los Angeles)
This is one of the best lance stories I've ever read! Keep up the good work! 10/10!
MauveAvenger (Anonymous) on Oct 01, 2013 10:10 pm (
Epilogue - It's Not Over)
(Too lazy to sign in) Ahhhhhh! Great ending! I'm about to check out the next story.
DiamondDoss (Signed) on Oct 01, 2013 08:28 pm (
Epilogue - It's Not Over)
I am so proud of you for finishing this awesome story!!!
Author's Response: Could not have done it with ya sista...love ya!
