Becca (Anonymous) on Aug 25, 2013 12:36 am (Chapter 21-Please Don't Leave Me)
This is such an amazing story. My heart was pounding the whole time. I can't wait to read more!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!

Alysen B. 



theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 23, 2013 09:51 pm (Chapter 21-Please Don't Leave Me)

*cries* Oh what a chapter, I'm so glad that she woke up! I did not want that to happen and I didn't want JC to be left alone with Dylan, he loves way too much..he nearly lost her too.

These lines here: “Because I don’t want her to wake up and for me not to be there,” his voice was hoarse. “I want her to know I was here the whole time and I never left her." *grabs Kleenex tissues*

Nicely done..thanks for the update..



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, girl!

Alysen B. 



Musiccrazedjazzy (Anonymous) on Aug 22, 2013 09:38 pm (Chapter 21-Please Don't Leave Me)
Oh my land I cried as I read this. Please don't end this yet. I love them.

Author's Response:

There should be at least 2 more chapters ;)

Thanks for reading!

Alysen B. 



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Aug 22, 2013 07:33 pm (Chapter 21-Please Don't Leave Me)
Okay, WOW! Thank God that Becca made it! The back and forth with Becca's life hanging in the balance had my heart racing more than it would if I were doing Zumba! Great chapter, once again I love your writing! 

Author's Response:

Thanks, Ashley!

PS my email is alysen_blaine@yahoo.com :) 





You must login (register) to comment.