musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Dec 29, 2012 06:56 pm (Characters)
Oh I like the logic and thinking in this. I feel like it's a movie script. :D

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! That's a pretty big compliment! Glad you liked it, Happy New Years!



Alysen Blaine (Signed) on Dec 27, 2012 03:33 am (Characters)

I LOVED it! Thanks so much, Ashley! It was a perfect ending with a great climax and beginning!

So glad you were my Secret Santa :)

Alysen B. 



Author's Response: Yay! You liked it! I'm so glad! Hope you had a Merry Christmas!



AmberW (Signed) on Dec 27, 2012 01:33 am (Happy New Year?)

Yay for Colorado! I went to Metro State! Haha

This was really cute :) I liked it!



Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it!



Whit1210 (Signed) on Dec 26, 2012 11:22 pm (Happy New Year?)

Very sweet story!  I wish I was snowed in at a Ski Resort with JC right now - great job, girl!



Author's Response: Awww, thanks!



theusagirl (Signed) on Dec 25, 2012 08:33 pm (Happy New Year?)

*thud* wow this was an amazing read! Dangnabbit where the heck do I start?? Ok, well, I guess I'll start from the top of this chapter..lolz *breathes*

These lines here: She didn’t need to be at Ice, and she didn’t need to be on a date right now. This was the perfect way to ring in the New Year. She wasn’t a party girl, and she wasn’t someone who dated either. She was just a girl who loved nature, and the simple things. This: the scenery, the peaceful and quietness, the simplicity was all she needed. Yep, so me..sweet and simple. :)

Now, the fact that JC came over and persay, interrupted her relaxation in the foyer, was really something, after a few drinks of wine, they started talking, I loved the countdown bit, then they KISSED *happy sigh* But then, she couldn't continue kissing him, she was afraid of expressing her feelings towards him, on how he hurt her in the past, but then they revealed their true feelings together and how they really felt.

I really liked the snow dance flashback that Hailey did..and it did snow! :D

Plus the ending was great, yep, the typical Law of Attraction.. ;) Awesome job.



Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading!



theusagirl (Signed) on Dec 25, 2012 08:03 pm (This Wasn't the Plan)

Oooh! What?? JC?? *gasp* OMG!

Ok ok ok..*whoosh* Let me backtrack on this, I would actually go to the New Years Eve party if Derek looked like that. He sounds super hot..woot! But then again, maybe it was nice to stay working at the hotel, cause if JC came with Jay after closing hours to see Hailey, I wanna know why! *reads next chapter*

This is exciting! lolz



Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it.



theusagirl (Signed) on Dec 25, 2012 07:41 pm (That's What Friends Are For)

This line here: She was definitely a behind-the-scenes kind of girl.

Yep, behind-the scenes is better than being in the spotlight, me no like much, so if I date JC one day(in my fanfic world) I'll do just that..LOL

Now, I like how her friends are with her, they remind me of my friends, and Jay sounds hot, John Stamos Jr?? Have Mercy! lolz

And this was the year 2003 during JC and his Schizo days, and he wanted to take a "breather" from Hailey, pssh really?? I must know what happens next..



Author's Response: Thanks for reading!





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