Comments For Our Time
theusagirl (Signed) on Dec 19, 2011 07:38 pm (Chapter 2)
Author's Response: Hopefully, you won't have as much trouble as JC did, but I looked for the hardest looking toy to put together too. Good luck assembling!
I actually bought a train set for my brother this year, now all I have to do is assemble it, great.. LOL
These lines here "JC was a proud man and very much a perfectionist when it came to himself. If he put his mind toward something, he wouldn’t quit until he had accomplished his goal.." That is very true.
Now I'm glad that nothing serious happened to Cole, now he's fast asleep dreaming of Christmas morning.
And lastly these lines here: His arm curled around her back while his free hand locked with her hand and rested against the beat of his heart. Almost in unison, they sighed as they relaxed in their lover’s arms and fell asleep. :)
*reads next chapter*
Author's Response: Hopefully, you won't have as much trouble as JC did, but I looked for the hardest looking toy to put together too. Good luck assembling!
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Dec 19, 2011 04:18 pm (Chapter 2)
My goodness, the kid pulled down the tree on himself! But I loved it for some reason when JC said, Cole, what hurts? Very father like and I love love love that! LOL at JC taking hours to put that train set together and then falling asleep with the screwdriver. aww I loved it when I got that picture in my head. *onto the next one*
Author's Response: He would make a great father. I seearched for the hottest toys of the season and came across a really cool train table that looked hard to put together so...it made the story!
Author's Response: He would make a great father. I seearched for the hottest toys of the season and came across a really cool train table that looked hard to put together so...it made the story!
