Lew (Signed) on Apr 28, 2012 06:35 pm (Chapter 38)
I'm glad that Lance defended Tiffani - I like how they seem to be settling into their marriage and are getting more comfortable with one another.  

Author's Response: Yep things are beginning to move smoothly between them, thanks for the review.. :)



JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Apr 28, 2012 04:14 pm (Chapter 38)
YES! I know I asked for drama, but I gotta be honest. The little incident was good, but what made me smile to most was coming down toward the end where I got to see the more 'intimate?' part of Lance and Tiff's relationship. I finally began to feel like nothing was being forced, and it was flowing. Loved the last line of this chapter!

Author's Response: YAY! :D I didn't have anything to do today much, so I decided to write that little chapter, I was like "Hmm, what if I add this and that, and voila." lolz I'm glad you loved that last line, :)





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