I smiled at the point when you brought the guys back into the picture. I love Chris! And just for the record, Angie sucks. Good work, but just a small tip. Most of the time, cliffhangers keep your readers entertained and anxious for another update, so when you're writing the end note, try to leave out what to expect in the upcoming chap. Looking forward to the next one!

Author's Response:

Cliffhangers..yeah sorry about that. I'll update soon. :) Thanks for the advice though.