Comments For Here With You
musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Nov 11, 2011 11:15 pm (Chapter 1)
Ok I need a tissue. It made me cry literally. Question is how did she die? or did she just leave him? So many questions. I love it so far.

Author's Response: The answers to how Jess died are in the first story of the series Stuck In A Flashback. It's called Best I Can. Hopefully you'll enjoy that story as much as you're enjoying this one. :)) Thanks for the read/review and if you do check out Best I Can, I hope you enjoy! I'll be posting more soon!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 09, 2011 07:51 pm (Chapter 1)

WOW! This was GREAT! Ooh Ooh! Ok let me pick out my favorite pieces. First off, there's a kid in my brother's kindy class and his name his Ian. AWW! :D Second, daddy JC is CUTENESS. And third I like these lines here, I find it sweet...lolz

JC frowned. "I gave it to Joey."

Lance nodded. "And Joey gave it to me and I gave it to Justin who gave it to Chris. We all know each other's codes for our houses."

JC rolled his eyes.

Above all, the part where JC was explaining about Suzanne, and it felt that he was middle school was just so hilarious. :D I like this story, would like to find out how this goes. :) Nice job.




kb4jc (Signed) on Nov 09, 2011 07:42 pm (Chapter 1)

love the chapter....i like this so far...can't wait to read more






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