Comments For Incredible You
Megan (Anonymous) on Mar 25, 2012 10:11 pm (Chapter 13)
AWWWWW YAY!! :) 2 very happy things in one chapter, an engagement and a baby! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah I know... I had been planning the engagment for awhile, but I got baby on the brain... I'm 13 weeks along with my second and so excited! lol So please excuse any overly dramatic scenes... I hope I don't get too bad between my two stories... Oh well :D



kb4jc (Signed) on Mar 25, 2012 01:34 am (Chapter 13)
ugh....love this story and chapter...please don't let it be too long...such a great story

Author's Response: I sure hope to write another chapter really soon... I have so many ideas, but so little time during this week...



theusagirl (Signed) on Mar 24, 2012 09:46 pm (Chapter 13)

Oh I would ride him all right, ;) *giggles* Woot! 2nd round here we go..ahem..

Ok, let me step off from daydream land, Aww he wants to be the father of Adrian, *squee* and Annabelle is expecting, AHH! Cuteness! I'm so happy that JC proposed to her, yayy! :D

You are making me want this man now, and he's all the way on the West coast, and I'm in the East..pssh. lolz

But above all, good chapter and thanks for the updates! :D *steps back on the dreamland express and hangs with JC*



Author's Response: Don't I know it... I'm stuck on the East coast as well... LOL... At least we still have dreamland for the nights ;P



Jasmine (Anonymous) on Mar 22, 2012 08:09 pm (Chapter 12)
love this story...especially this chapter it was alot of drama and craziness yet i couldnt help but laugh at it



justice loves jc (Signed) on Mar 19, 2012 06:58 pm (Chapter 12)
oh my god! i love this so much! spent a long time reading it and then decideding to finally log in and tell you i love it. i love it. :D update soon please



kb4jc (Signed) on Mar 19, 2012 11:24 am (Chapter 12)
wow...talk bout a major mix up and can i slap the pa...what a...im a lady so i wont say it 



Megan (Anonymous) on Mar 17, 2012 09:10 pm (Chapter 12)
Well damn that would be terrible timing if they both flew out to see each other at the same time. And WTF? Who does this Kelly lady think she is! Crazy bitch. Glad things got straightened out and Anabelle and JC will have time to talk to each other. Great to see an update! :)

Author's Response: Thanks ife's been pretty crazy lately...



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Mar 17, 2012 01:50 pm (Chapter 12)

OOOH! THAT KELLY FREAK! *catclaws* *lets dogs loose*

Yes Annabelle, everything would be alright, JC has got it covered. I'm looking forward so they can talk to eachother again..

I'm glad you finally updated though! Hope all is well..nice job! :D

P.S I have some stories up, maybe one day you can read them whenever you get the chance.. :)



Author's Response: I will definitely check them out soon! ;D Thanks for all of your great reviews!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Dec 16, 2011 05:22 pm (Chapter 11)

That night JC and Anabelle made love several times. It was no longer about fast and furious sex and desire. It was more, for both of them. Neither would admit it to the other yet, but each time they reached orgasm it felt as though their soul would reach out and grab hold of the others, sending them into a spiraling abyss.

*happy sigh*

Ok, love that JC and Annabelle had nice time at the beach with Adrian... :) Awws.

And that Kelly is such an ughh! Telling lies to JC about Annabelle, and Annabelle getting the wrong messages about JC, and JC also getting wrong messsages. Thats right Annabelle, go take that flight to LA, and see whats up with that Kelly freak. :P

Nice job, and thanks for the update.




Megan (Anonymous) on Dec 15, 2011 01:43 am (Chapter 11)
So cute to see that Adrian and JC get along so well and how much that Anabelle and JC care for each other. And who the hell does this Kelly lady think she is?? *frustrated sigh*, hope that with Anabelle flying to LA to speak with JC will clear some stuff up. Good update :)



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 07, 2011 07:49 pm (Chapter 10)

*tear Oh the story about what happened to Riley was so sad. *grabs Kleenex tissues* So THATS what happened to him.. :(

Now on a lighter note, I'm so glad that Annabelle opened up to JC and told him the truth, and I loved the fact that JC is understandable. So thats nice, he's such a good shoulder to cry on... :) And he's a good listener, *happy sigh*

And I like the part where Lisa shows up and both JC and Annabelle are snuggled in bed, and quickly pull apart. This line here " And three, damn JC you’re looking mighty fine this morning,” Lisa said with a smirk and a small waved of her hand at JC. Ahh yes...-get-up-the-morning sexy JC..*swoon* Hellloooooo. ;) I would cherish that moment, yes I would..

And lastly, the part of the zoo was too cute..yay! Looks like JC and Adrian are getting along well, and Annabelle is falling in love with JC(yes..us girls have fallen hard for the man..me included) Tee hee..anyway..great job! :D Thanks for updating..



Author's Response: Thanks... I can't wait to see where this is heading myself... I stopped planning it out in my head and decided to just let it flow....



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 07, 2011 07:24 pm (Chapter 9)

Well surprise JC, yes she has a son, but wow. And I agree she was supposed to tell him about Adrian, but I guess she couldn't.. *dun dun dun* These lines here This isn’t something little like, oh by the way I have a dog!” JC exclaimed as he began pacing the kitchen. I found that funny, cause JC can get pretty sarcastic when he gets angry, however, angry JC is hot. ;) Oooh I wanna know what happens next.. :D Good job.



Author's Response: Yeah that's how I see JC myself as one who can be sarcastic... LOL



Megan (Anonymous) on Nov 07, 2011 06:25 pm (Chapter 10)
Awwww yay!! Sooo glad that JC and Anabelle could talk things out and still have a relationship. And now that JC has met Adrian, seems like things are going on the right track! Great update :)

Author's Response: Thanks... I hope things stay on the right track, sometimes these stories have a mind of their own as I'm writing them... LOL



kb4jc (Signed) on Nov 01, 2011 06:49 pm (Chapter 9)
wow...good read...better turn out good....love the story

Author's Response: Awesome!



Megan (Anonymous) on Oct 31, 2011 09:30 pm (Chapter 9)
Ohhhhh woof dah...well I guess thats one way for JC to find out about Adrian but probably not the best way. I feel kinda bad for Anabelle with the way that JC reacted but I can't blame JC for reacting that way. Hopefully they can work things out cause I love these 2 too much to see them fall apart. Great update!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks... I hope to focus on the story more once I finish this paper... I can't wait for winter break...





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