Comments For Not Alone
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 15, 2011 07:36 pm (Chapter 17)

Oh wow! That was SOOOO beautiful! *grabs Kleenex tissues* They should make a collabo! What Chris said.. lolz this line here "“Screw her voice...the two of them together.” Chris said in total shock. LOL! This was great, :) I love that her family gets along with JC and everything, so yay! :D And oooh whats the next chapter, *waits patiently for next update* Good job though..




JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Sep 15, 2011 06:28 pm (Chapter 17)
Ohhh such a sweet chapter! Argh about time you updated! LOL :P I love that David has taken an immediate liking to JC. I'm glad he can see that JC's a good guy for Kara and can support her and love her. The singing between the two of them was nice. I laughed at this line that Chris said: "Screw her voice... The two of them together!" I loved that line. And the ending when Kara threw that picture of her and Nate into the fireplace, I was like 'Go Kara!' :)) It's a step of moving forward and I like that. I was actually a little mad when you ended the chapter! Can't wait for the next one!!

Author's Response: lmao....haven't you heard....always leave them wanting more...thanks for the review and i will be updating really soon





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