Comments For Business First
Keediluv (Signed) on Nov 04, 2011 11:56 am (Fifty Five)

Oh

M

Gee!  

I'm so excited!  Yay, I can't believe that just happened. Even though I know it's what's supposed to happen, I still can't believe it happened.  So, yeah I'm happy :)  But, can he really give up his job??

Ki

P.S- I mean really, can he do that?!? 



Author's Response: I knew you'd be happy! Lol.  There's more to the job thing...you know Abbey could never put up with a stir crazed Justin in the house 24/7 lol.  you'll have to wait and see!



StarStruck24 (Signed) on Nov 04, 2011 10:25 am (Fifty Five)
Wow. Think that's all I can say now. [say yes abbey!]

Author's Response: yay!



StarStruck24 (Signed) on Nov 04, 2011 10:24 am (Fifty Four)
I knew that was gonna happen! Now to see what happens next...the updates are awesome. They're even more awesome since you don't have power! I, as an avid reader of this story, appreciate it times a million.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate you even more for reading! It means so much to me that you enjoy the story! An update is coming soon :)



MissM (Signed) on Nov 04, 2011 08:18 am (Fifty Five)

I liked it! Wonder what Justin is going to do now? 

 



Author's Response: you'll find out soon!



wpoohbear (Signed) on Nov 04, 2011 08:05 am (Fifty Five)
So sweet! I'm sad it's almost over. One thing I must say...I can't see Justin just quiting his job. I think he would get on Abby's nerves being around all the time. We'll see how it turns out!

Author's Response: Don't worry...things aren't finalized yet :) There's more to the job thing...youll just have to read on and see! More soon!



SJane (Signed) on Nov 04, 2011 01:56 am (Fifty Four)
aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh

Author's Response: eeeeeeeeeeeep



JoJo (Signed) on Nov 04, 2011 12:11 am (Fifty Four)
Lol I love how Justin called Abbey out on her bs! Loved it!! Great update! Can't wait to see how this night goes!

Author's Response: Somebody needed to do it! Yay!



samantha (Anonymous) on Nov 03, 2011 10:09 pm (One)
One word...WOW!!!



MissM (Signed) on Nov 03, 2011 08:10 pm (Fifty Four)
**cabbage patch**



Keediluv (Signed) on Nov 03, 2011 07:53 pm (Fifty Four)

I knew it!  I knew they were each other's mystery dates. If Abbey doesn't get over her stubborness and stop putting that boy through hell, I'm going to kill the both of you. LOL! You know it's with love that I say this :)  Justin' heart can't take much more of this and I know you know this.  She's going to be completely miserable if she misses out (because of said stubborness) and she has to watch Justin move on to someone else.  It'll kill her, and she'll deserve it because she's done it to herself.

Ki

P.S- I admire your committment to your readers mama. Cranking out stories without power!  We love you too :) 



Author's Response: Ah don't kill me! LOL.  I know you love me haha.  Thanks for reading Ki.  You're the best.  I think you'll like the outcome of this ;)



Keediluv (Signed) on Nov 03, 2011 07:48 pm (Fifty Three)

I feel where this is going...

Ki 




Keediluv (Signed) on Nov 03, 2011 07:47 pm (Fifty Two)

That darn Abbey!  Determined to try and hold on to something that she knows isn't working because she's that dedicated.  You gotta admire that but at the same time, it still makes you want to shake her lol.  Moving on...

Ki 




JoJo (Signed) on Nov 03, 2011 12:58 am (Fifty Three)

PLEASE  tell me that this hot rich business guy Shawna is going out with is Trace! So that means the single friend is Justin! If it's true...I think Abbey really needs this little push.

Great update! I really love how dedicated you are about getting these updates out! And I'm really sad to hear this is starting to come to a close! It's been one of my favorites!



Author's Response: My lips are sealed ;) I'm sad that the story is ending too.  I wish i could make it go on forever but then it would probably just get boring lol.  This is by far my favorite story that I've written.  More soon and thank you so much for reading!



Lady T (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2011 10:45 pm (One)
Girl I dont know where you're going w/ this but im liking the direction thus far. These 2 updates just MADE my day!!! You are a phenomenal writer and awesome storyteller!! Thank you for sharing w/ us :-)

Author's Response: aw that is such a nice thing to say! I'm very flattered taht you think so highly of my writing. I love sharing it with you! You inspire me to make this story the best it can be! More soon!!



Tanya (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2011 08:33 pm (Fifty Three)
sooommmemeeeee thing tells me that this double  date that shes going on is going to be with justin and trace! WOOHOO! ITS TIME FOR THEM TO GET BACK TOGETHER!

Author's Response: I'll never tellllll Hahahahaha more soooooon!





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